deathchoice Posted July 8, 2009 Report Share Posted July 8, 2009 This monster can attack three times during the Battle Phase, but only if this cards controller discards 5 cards from the top of there Deck to the Graveyard if the controller does not do this the effect of this monster is negated and it can only attack once during the Battle Phase. When this monster is destroyed as a result of battle, each player can Special Summon one level 4 or lower monster from there hand to the Field. plz help me with my ocg grammar and and give me suggestions to improve the effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Verdom Posted July 8, 2009 Report Share Posted July 8, 2009 HEY JACOB WAT DO U NEED HELP ON??????? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted July 8, 2009 Report Share Posted July 8, 2009 This monster can attack three times during the Battle Phase, but only if this cards controller discards 5 cards from the top of there Deck to the Graveyard if the controller does not do this the effect of this monster is negated and it can only attack once during the Battle Phase. When this monster is destroyed as a result of battle, each player can Special Summon one level 4 or lower monster from there hand to the Field. fix the bold..then i'll rate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted July 8, 2009 Report Share Posted July 8, 2009 name should be Darkness Tunder Dragon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QuimicVital Posted July 8, 2009 Report Share Posted July 8, 2009 This should be a 9 or 10 stars card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deathchoice Posted July 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 8, 2009 Thanks kitty very helpful =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted July 8, 2009 Report Share Posted July 8, 2009 mkay now i rate.... the pic is okthe stars need to be increased by one level at least... (should b level 9)all in all good...8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QuimicVital Posted July 8, 2009 Report Share Posted July 8, 2009 mkay now i rate.... the pic is okthe stars need to be increased by one level at least... (should b level 9)all in all good...8.5/10 You recomended the same amount of stars as me:x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted July 8, 2009 Report Share Posted July 8, 2009 mkay now i rate.... the pic is okthe stars need to be increased by one level at least... (should b level 9)all in all good...8.5/10 You recomended the same amount of stars as me:x seems great minds think alike.. srry i didn't read above post.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QuimicVital Posted July 8, 2009 Report Share Posted July 8, 2009 mkay now i rate.... the pic is okthe stars need to be increased by one level at least... (should b level 9)all in all good...8.5/10 You recomended the same amount of stars as me:x seems great minds think alike.. srry i didn't read above post..don't worry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 9, 2009 Report Share Posted July 9, 2009 pic is just fine, though not the first time I've seen it. Effect looks balanced 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted July 9, 2009 Report Share Posted July 9, 2009 great card though. effect is good. so is the pic. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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