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[animeluvrguy]

Hello everyone, this is my first custom card. I've made more, but I thought I just post this one to see what every thinks and can help me create better ones in the future. My friends kind of think that I make overly unfair cards and to balance them more. Please make comments and suggestions, I highly appreciate it. Thanks.

 

 

Card Effect: Squall Leonheart + Dizzy The Forbidden Angel

Each of your standby phases, you gain 1000 LP and your opponent gains 500 LP. Sacrifice half your LP to reduce your opponents LP to 1000. Tribute 1 monster to double this cards ATK. Tribute 2 to attack directly. Tribute 3 to reduce both player LP to 1 and this card can attack directly. Tribute 4 monsters to reduce your opponent's LP to 1 and you gain 4000 LP.

 

 

Card Effect: Tribute 4 Monsters for this card. The ATK and DEF of this card is the sum of the ATK and DEF of the monsters tributed. The Effects of all of the opponent's Magic, Trap and Effect monsters are negated and are sent out of play. This card is sent out of play instead of the graveyard when destroyed by battle.

 

[Xx Little Elf xX]

dizzy seems kinda........ powerful

[RAEGING D0GKING]

Alia

wow

the effect is better if you tribute 3 monsters you nearly win

if you tribute 4 monster and your life points are 7000 and opponents 50

no diffrence

only worse for you

and yes they are well overpowered cards

[SataroMiyaki]

overpowered, but I like the originality ^_^ I give these cards 8/10

they have some nice pics as well.

[laxar]

Ain't the first card from FF? otherwise i think they look awsome but yet OP.

 

6/10

[Max Darkness]

Some overused pics, but the effects are VERY overpowered (and have a few OCG errors). Re-work these.

[Captain Murphy ☆]

2 of the pics are from Final fantasy and if X is the attack and defense of one why fuse them and make it lower?

[animeluvrguy]

Hear are the same cards that I revised and some new ones. Thanks for your comments and suggestions. Please keep them coming.

 

 

 

 

 

 

[Cavloe]

Hey Guys i Made A Deck But It Stinks i Only Have One Card That Looks Real Can Someone Give Me Some Advice?

 

 

Thank you.

[Max Darkness]

Let me give you some suggestions and pointers on these cards.

 

Alta

First off, reduce to a Level 9 (if you carry out my changes).

The first part of the effect is fine (-ish). However, the rest of the effect makes it very overpowered. For example, if you have 3 LIGHT monsters on the field, and 5 in the Graveyard; you have a 4000 ATK boost, taking it up to 6500 ATK.

If you then tribute 1 monster on your side of the field to double this card's ATK, you end up with 12000 ATK. If you then tribute the other 2, you end up with a monster with 11000 ATK that can attack twice. Which is overpowered. This is what I suggest.

 

"Dizzy The Forbidden Angel" + "Squall Lionheart"

During each of your Standby Phases, both players gain 500 Life Points. This card gains 150 ATK for each LIGHT monster on your side of the field. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can Tribute 1 Level 4 or lower LIGHT monster on your side of the field. If you do, inflict an amount of damage to your opponent equal to the tributed monster's original ATK.

 

Dizzy

I'd consider a name change, since it sounds a bit silly.

As for the effect, it is overpowered, because it is the "Winged Dragon of Ra"'s effect (sort of). I think a large overhaul of this card is required.

I don't understand why a Lv.12 fuses with a Lv.9 to form a Lv.10. Reduce "Dizzy" to a Lv.5/6 and have this effect:

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 1 LIGHT monster. This card's ATK and DEF are equal to the Level Stars of the tributed monster x 300. Twice per turn, you can negate the effects of Spell (not Magic) and Trap Cards that designate this card. If this face-up card is destroyed or removed from the field, it is removed from play.

ATK/DEF: ?/?

 

Squall Lionheart

It needs an effect, and for the reason above, a Level downgrade. Reduce to Lv.5/6 (you could also change to a FIRE monster) and use this effect.

 

When this card is Normal Summoned or Set, Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Warrior-Type monster from your Deck in Attack Position. When this card is Special Summoned, Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower LIGHT monster from your Graveyard in face-up Defense Position.

ATK/DEF: 2200/1000

 

Rinoa Heartily

Very overpowered effect, since it can destroy all Decks based on removing cards from play. You should make it a one-time effect. Also, the ATK gain is too powerful, so scrap that.

 

As long as this card remains face-up on the field, you can draw 1 extra card from your Deck during your Draw Phase. When this card is Normal Summoned, you can pay 1000 Life Points. If you do, add all removed from play cards to your Deck.

ATK/DEF: 2000/3000

 

The Farplane

Yet another FF image, so you'll want to change that. Also, the effect is too powerful. It allows both players to summon more monsters and gives LIGHT and DARK monsters a potent boost. I believe a more interesting effect would be this:

 

As long as this card remains face-up on the field, during your Standby Phase, you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower DARK or LIGHT monster from your opponent's Deck. During your opponent's Standby Phase, they can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower DARK or LIGHT monster from your Deck.

 

Cloud Strife

Give it an effect and downgrade it; there are too many high-level monsters in this 'set'. Possibly a Lv.5 with 1500/1500.

 

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Hey Guys i Made A Deck But It Stinks i Only Have One Card That Looks Real Can Someone Give Me Some Advice?

 

Thank you.

 

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[bLinD (:]

A little OP'd, but the pics are great 7/10

[lacikus]

2nd pic doesn't have BG last card is vanilla 5/10

[Milk-Chan]

Yeah overall to OP'ed. I'd listen to Max Darkness's suggestions.