Skippy Canoe Posted July 9, 2009 Report Share Posted July 9, 2009 This is my complete set of Toxic Ocean, a Water-based set. I organized the cards in groups for faster loading and easier navigating. Also: -I know some pictures are too realistic and not like real cards, but I literally used almost all of the pictures I found. -If you see a very hard to read effect, look below the card. I probably retyped it so you can see it better. -Please rate in your comments. Some constructive criticism would be helpful, too. -I usually leave a response to most comments, so check back if you want. -There should be a booster pack for this set sometime soon, too. -Look at my other sets if you liked this one. :) Other than that, enjoy looking at the Toxic Ocean set. :D [spoiler=Toxic Ocean Mermaids] Young Mermaid's Effect:This card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle. When this card is attacked, designate another attack target. Then calculate damage. If this card is the only Monster Card on your field, then calculate damage normally without destroying this card. If this card is destroyed by the effect of a Spell or Trap Card, then 600 damage is inflicted to you. [spoiler=First 2 Mutants]Mutated Serpent's Effect:This card cannot be Normal Summoned. This card can only be Ritual Summoned by activating "Toxic Waste." If there is a "Mutated Mermaid" on your field, increase this card's ATK and DEF by 700. If either this card or "Mutated Mermaid" are destroyed while this card's effect is activated, both cards are removed from play. [spoiler=3 Warrior-like Cards]Sea Nymph's Effect:This card cannot be Normal Summoned. It must be Flip Summoned. If this card is attacked while in face-down Defense Position, it is destroyed without calculating damage. If it is attacked while in face-up Attack Position, destroy the attacking monster without calculating damage. [spoiler=My First Synchro] [spoiler=Sea Dragons]Enemy Sea Dragon's Effect:"Maneating Sea Dragon" + "Guardian Sea Dragon"If this monster is the only Monster Card on your field, take control of 1 of your opponent's monsters until another monster is Summoned to your field, this card is destroyed, or the designated monster is destroyed. [spoiler=More Sea Women] [spoiler=Toxic Mutants] [spoiler=Another Synchro; More Sea Creatures; A Few Tuners]Oceanic Dragon's Effect:1 Tuner monster + 2 or more non-Tuner monstersWhen this card is successfully Synchro Summoned, increase the ATK and DEF of every WATER monster on your field by 400. This bonus is in effect until this monster is destroyed or removed from your field in any way. [spoiler=Some More Sea Monsters; 2 Union Cards]Surface Guardian's Effect:Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if you control this monster on the field, you can equip it to your "Abyssal Guardian" as an Equip Spell Card OR unequip the Union equipment and Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. While equipped to a monster by this card's effect, each time the equipped monster inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, destroy 1 face-up Monster Card on the field. (1 monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster is destroyed by battle, destroy this card instead.) Abyssal Guardian's Effect:Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if you control this monster on the field, you can equip it to your "Surface Guardian" as an Equip Spell Card OR unequip the Union equipment and Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. While equipped to a monster by this card's effect, each time the equipped monster inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, destroy 1 face-up Monster Card on the field. (1 monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster is destroyed by battle, destroy this card instead.) [spoiler=Spell and Trap Cards] I made sure that they're in order. Please comment and rate these cards so I know what you think. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alcander Posted July 9, 2009 Report Share Posted July 9, 2009 defence position-Defense Position, summon-Summon, the effects are too simple, pics OK, Good OCG. 8/10 (next time, put your cards in a spoiler.) Exiled Mermaid is OPD. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted July 9, 2009 Report Share Posted July 9, 2009 cards should be in spoiler. good effects except for Exiled Mermaid (OPed). good OCG except for a few mistakes. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skippy Canoe Posted July 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2009 Thank you. I changed Exiled Mermaid and put the cards in a spoiler. Although, summoned by itself doesn't need to be capitalized at the beginning, just things like Normal Summoned and Ritual Summoned. I was wrong on the Defense Position, though. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alcander Posted July 9, 2009 Report Share Posted July 9, 2009 Summoned need to be capitalized. read the OCG thread (and Summon too) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tortoise Kyle Posted July 9, 2009 Report Share Posted July 9, 2009 Just for the record, it wouldnt be male mermaid, it would be merman Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skippy Canoe Posted July 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2009 Thank you, I must have misunderstood it when I read it. I fixed Mutated Mermaid. Also, I made the card "Male Mermaid" so other Mermaids that depended on cards with the word "Mermaid" in them's effects would still work with the card. That did bother me, but it was the only way to do it without making my effects too confusing. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted July 9, 2009 Report Share Posted July 9, 2009 is just put the effect like this. Example: Select 1 "Mermaid" or "Merman" monster from your Deck and add it to your hand. No the cards: Ehhh...., try not using that type of pictures, it is not a yugioh type picture :? Bad OCG :? Bad everything :? Sorry :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skippy Canoe Posted July 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 I used your advice. Although... 1. I'm sorry you feel that way. :(2. I try to choose the most Yu-gi-oh Card-like pictures, so if you don't like the best ones I found, then I guess my best isn't good enough to you.3. I had near-perfect OCG, according to others, and after constantly changing it from advice, shouldn't it not be "bad OCG?"4. How come every other comment I had was around 8/10 then? Sorry if you feel that way, but I think differently. I'm not trying to be rude, and I know you aren't either. I just thought I had to say that. :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 10, 2009 Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 defence position-Defence Position' date=' summon-[b']Summon[/b], the effects are too simple, pics OK, Good OCG. 8/10 (next time, put your cards in a spoiler.) Exiled Mermaid is OPD. not Defence Position, it's Defense Position. OCG looks fine to me 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skippy Canoe Posted July 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 Thank you so much, it annoys me so much how so many people use "Defence" instead of "Defense." :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 10, 2009 Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 Thank you so much' date=' it annoys me so much how so many people use "Defence" instead of "Defense." :D[/quote'] Look, technically BOTH ways are right. The English way is Defence, the American way is Defense. In their respective dictionaries, both are acceptable, it's just that the American way we see far more and therefore we think is the right one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skippy Canoe Posted July 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 bump :O Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ģค๓blє Posted July 11, 2009 Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 is just put the effect like this. Example: Select 1 "Mermaid" or "Merman" monster from your Deck and add it to your hand. No the cards: Ehhh....' date=' try not using that type of pictures, it is [b']not a yugioh type picture[/b] :? [b[bad OCG[/b] :? Bad everything :? Sorry :( Hmmm... What's wrong with the above comment? Maybe that, images aren't easy to find in bid numbers and that's the best he could find. Or that the OCG is good and you just don't know how to read. Well... Ya. Now for my rating... Ocg is good *Stairs at Zeaux*. Pics are good, some are a little realistic. But as I said, they are hard to find. So.... 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nikkiboy029 Posted July 11, 2009 Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 i don't think that these pics really relate to any of there names, which is major set back to theses cards, plus there not very yugioh like pics either Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rehva Posted July 11, 2009 Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 good Job. Some Cards are op'ed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ģค๓blє Posted July 11, 2009 Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 i don't think that these pics really relate to any of there names' date=' which is major set back to theses cards, plus there not very yugioh like pics either[/quote'] Are you trying to tell me either that, the name "Mermaid" doesn't relate to a mermaid pic, or you don't know what a mermaid is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skippy Canoe Posted July 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2009 Thank you for commenting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Nikkiboy029 Posted July 12, 2009 Report Share Posted July 12, 2009 i don't think that these pics really relate to any of there names' date=' which is major set back to theses cards, plus there not very yugioh like pics either[/quote'] Are you trying to tell me either that, the name "Mermaid" doesn't relate to a mermaid pic, or you don't know what a mermaid is. No im saying the word in front of mermaid should be at least a little relative to the cards pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skippy Canoe Posted July 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 12, 2009 Any more comments? Also... Sorry. I agree with you. Though some of them make sense. Just not ones like "Cannibal Mermaid," "Evil Mermaid," and "Royal Mermaid." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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