Demon Summoner

[deathchoice]

If this card battles a non-DARK monster, destroy that monster without applying damage calculation. During your Main Phase you can pay 500 Life Point's to Special Summon a level 3 or lower DARK attributed monster from your hand or Graveyard to Face-up defense position.

[Shadow Chaos]

OCG Fixes:

 

1. "If this card battles a non-DARK monster, destroy the monster..."

2. Once per turn, during your Main Phase...

3. Life Points, not Point's

4. Capitalize Special Summon

5. DARK monster, not DARK attributed monster

6. Lower hand, I think, and lower "f" in face-up, and change to, to in

 

That's about it. I could be wrong, though. The pic's creepy. o_O The effect is alright, so my rating for you is 7.5/10. :)

[Ookami Moriyama]

Fix:

If this card battles a non-DARK monster, destroy that monster without applying damage calculation. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can pay 500 Life Points to Special Summon 1 Level 3 or lower DARK monster from your hand or Graveyard to your field in face-up Defense Position.

 

nice card tough

 

9.7/10

[deathchoice]

If this card battles a non-DARK monster' date=' destroy that monster without applying damage calculation. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can pay 500 Life Points to Special Summon 1 Level 3 or lower DARK monster from your hand or Graveyard to your field in face-up Defense Position.

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thanks for rates =]

[ragnarok1945]

OCG is fine, and the effects balanced. Pic looks good too

 

9.5/10

[Maliki]

OCG is good for a beginner, 9.3/10