killaman2 Posted July 10, 2009 Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 rate 1-10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Card Constructor Posted July 10, 2009 Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 Three cards? But I only see two... Ataksuki - Oh god, I don't even know where to begin! There is a mistake on the very first LETTER of your effect, let alone the rest of that atrocity. ***Pro Tip!*** - Learn to spell "field". Ok, now what is with this "it will take down defense" crap? You could just say that it destroys... um, what does it destroy? You didn't even tell me THAT!!!! Does it destroy one card? Perhaps all cards? How many times does this effect occur? How much direct damage does this card deal when my opponent has a face-down... err... that's down? What if he has a face-down card that's up? (Please note my sarcasm) And you could at least crop the picture so that it fits. I'm sorry, but this fail of a card deserves a 0/10 Destroyal - I have a feeling that english was not your first language. Again, you forgot to to capitalize amongst other grammatical mistakes. So this card can deal ("do" isn't the right word) direct damage. You do realize that every monster can do this... You might as well put "This card can be summoned". Now if you meant that Destroyal can directly attack, even if the opponent has monsters, then the card is too strong. And if the card is destroyed, it can come back to the graveyard? Does it not go to the grave when it is destroyed? Also, "U sacrifice a card" means what? Discarding a card from your hand? Tributing a monster? 0/10 Please do not make any more cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
S_Stranger Posted July 10, 2009 Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 8/10 - Pictures3/10 - Effects4/10 - Grammer1/10 - Use Of Stars Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
[B.C.E.] Posted July 10, 2009 Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 Okay your cards aren't very good. I suggest you go to the yugioh wikia and look at a bunch of cards with similar effects that you want to put in your cards and learn how to write the text correctly. Another thing is don't use Divines because people don't like those around here. Also lower the levels of the two by a lot because the cards just look stupid as level 12 with only 3000 ATK. Overall scrap these two and start over completely. Keep trying though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 10, 2009 Report Share Posted July 10, 2009 pics are good, but effects and OCG are REALLY bad 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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