devon1 Posted July 12, 2009 Report Share Posted July 12, 2009 hi. i just wanted to show this card and see if you have any suggestions on how my card should be. here it is please don't be harsh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ArtemisFowl Posted July 12, 2009 Report Share Posted July 12, 2009 I think it is just too simple Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rideouter Posted July 12, 2009 Report Share Posted July 12, 2009 Good starting card but here is some OCG help: "All FIRE monsters gain 500 ATK and DEF Points." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hirikiri Inaghe Posted July 12, 2009 Report Share Posted July 12, 2009 This card is way too simple sorry 1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain Murphy ☆ Posted July 12, 2009 Report Share Posted July 12, 2009 i agree with everyone else who is saying that its too simple Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cuckoos Posted July 12, 2009 Report Share Posted July 12, 2009 Never use real-life pics. Just a tip.Bland effect, I'd rather use Molten Destruction.Try and look at REALISTIC cards, and try and learn off of the OCG. Overall, 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Devil Posted July 12, 2009 Report Share Posted July 12, 2009 [align=center]The effect is not really too simple, 'cause most of basic Field Spell Cards were like this, ex: Umi, Wasteland, etc.So, I give it a nice 7/10[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rehva Posted July 12, 2009 Report Share Posted July 12, 2009 USE Computer Made Pics. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prince Wing Posted July 12, 2009 Report Share Posted July 12, 2009 Don't be harsh? Sure. Well first, I don't love the pic. And the effect is kind of dull, with OCG (Official Card Grammer) errors in there. Truthfully, I'd give you a 1/10, for trying. Hope that isn't to harsh. But I'd raise it to 3/10, since you're new. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 12, 2009 Report Share Posted July 12, 2009 WAY too simple of an effect. Please give it more effects 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zauls Posted July 12, 2009 Report Share Posted July 12, 2009 Too simple and bad OCG before ArtemisFowl fixed. 1/10. Why is it always new mwmbers that do this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Salty911 Posted July 12, 2009 Report Share Posted July 12, 2009 i like it i beginer too those guys on here a lot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
devon1 Posted July 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 how about this then? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted July 21, 2009 Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 WAY too simple of an effect. Please give it more effects 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
devon1 Posted July 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 i'll pull out my strongest card if i must Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PANDORUM™ Posted July 21, 2009 Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 i agree with everyone else who is saying that its too simple Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.GhostRyder Posted July 21, 2009 Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 Way too simple. OCG Error correction:All FIRE atrribute monstes gain 500 ATK & DEF 5/10 for your effort Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ihop Posted July 21, 2009 Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 i agree with everyone else who is saying that its too simpleTrue Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 21, 2009 Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 OCG needs work, effect WAY too simple and dull 4.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
devon1 Posted July 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 you forced methis is my most powerful magic card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 Sorry but, look at the OCG thread. Don't use real life pics. Always give a card a pic. and make more creative effects. That last card you did Cascade has a good effect it just has bad OCG, it's OP'd (Overpowered.) and it needs a pic. I hope this somewhat helps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.GhostRyder Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 ... No picEpic Fail Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
devon1 Posted July 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 i cant find many pics on my comp. u can't blame me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.GhostRyder Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 But there aint a pic on the card lolSearch Devinart Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
devon1 Posted July 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 i'd need the pics url Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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