Yu-gi-oh GX - Destiny of a Duelist - Chapter 9 is up

[Asuka Reishim]

Sarah Arc? What the hell? What Fan Fic contest? I'm Very Confused!

[Mysty]

Sarah Arc? What the hell? What Fan Fic contest? I'm Very Confused!

 

Well, if you don't know what's happening, at least it will be a surprise to you. If you REALLY REALLY want to know where I found the spoiler despite the fact it will give you an idea of what will happen, ask your questions again.

[Asuka Reishim]

I want to be surprised! I already have a character and a slight idea whats gonna happen in the story.

[Kuro no Keiyakushu]

After such a huge delay, I think I should type more of the story/post the NickLD version of Sam/add a duel disk to Albus

[Asuka Reishim]

Can someone just please explain the Sarah Arc to me im getting paranoid about it.

[Kuro no Keiyakushu]

Can someone just please explain the Sarah Arc to me im getting paranoid about it.

 

Well don't get paranoid because I'm not explaining it. Why? Because it's more fun finding out =D

[Mysty]

Can someone just please explain the Sarah Arc to me im getting paranoid about it.

 

Let's break it down:

 

Sarah - a girl who appeared in the fan-fic at Chapter 9 I believe

Arc - part of a storyline. In Yugioh 5D's, there was the Fortune Cup Arc and then the Dark Signers Arc. Now in 5D's we're in the Infinity Arc.

 

So the Sarah Arc would be a storyline that would involve Sarah. As for what will happen, you'll have to find out by reading.

[Kuro no Keiyakushu]

Can someone just please explain the Sarah Arc to me im getting paranoid about it.

 

Let's break it down:

 

Sarah - a girl who appeared in the fan-fic at Chapter 9 I believe

Arc - part of a storyline. In Yugioh 5D's' date=' there was the Fortune Cup Arc and then the Dark Signers Arc. Now in 5D's we're in the Infinity Arc.

 

So the Sarah Arc would be a storyline that would involve Sarah. As for what will happen, you'll have to find out by reading.

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-.- well that didnt tell TOO much of the story

thank you for that explanation MG =D

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-.- my computer has a virus and deleted some of chapter 8 and chapter 9 -.- @%$#!

Did anyone by any chance copy my whole fan fic and has those chapters? 50 points reward.

[Mysty]

At least this gives you a chance to rewrite Chapter 9 better than the last time.

Although not word for word, this is what I have of Chapter 9 from memory:

 

[spoiler=Chapter 9]

Everybody noticed Leo was missing, though only Albus and Sam knew why. It was said that he left duel Academy.

 

It was still an average day except for the fact that the classes were much quieter. Albus then continued walking through the average hallway. He then bumped into a girl who was running to get to class. All of her cards flew out of her hand. Albus then started to pick up the cards. He then saw his hand planted on top of hers. He blushed.

 

"Sorry about that," said Albus. "My name's Albus. H-H-How's it -"

 

"I'm not sure if I can explain it to you."

 

"You can explain it to me."

 

"Well, I nearly died from blood loss, but at that time I met a god-like creature. It said that it would let me live again if I followed a certain condition. I don't know what it was, but I think it had to do with you. By the way, my name's Sarah. It was nice meeting you Albus." She then got her cards and ran off. Albus didn't know what thoughts went racing through his head.

 

Albus didn't talk about this to anybody. Instead he just decided to think about what this condition was. After school, he decided to look for Sarah. He saw her sitting on a bench with her head down.

 

"Hey Sarah."

 

She then looked up. he seemed surprised to see Albus. "Oh hi Albus."

 

"Do you want to take a walk?"

 

"Sure. Just a walk." They were walking for an hour without realizing that they were walking in circles. She then remembered the God's condition. "Sorry Albus, I gotta go now. Bye." She ran off.

 

"Bye," said Albus.

 

 

Since this is only Chapter 9 and none of Chapter 8 or 10, and it isn't word for word, this is absolutely free; it isn't necessary to give me points for it.

[Kuro no Keiyakushu]

At least this gives you a chance to rewrite Chapter 9 better than the last time.

Although not word for word' date=' this is what I have of Chapter 9 from memory:

 

[spoiler=Chapter 9']

Everybody noticed Leo was missing, though only Albus and Sam knew why. It was said that he left duel Academy.

 

It was still an average day except for the fact that the classes were much quieter. Albus then continued walking through the average hallway. He then bumped into a girl who was running to get to class. All of her cards flew out of her hand. Albus then started to pick up the cards. He then saw his hand planted on top of hers. He blushed.

 

"Sorry about that," said Albus. "My name's Albus. H-H-How's it -"

 

"I'm not sure if I can explain it to you."

 

"You can explain it to me."

 

"Well, I nearly died from blood loss, but at that time I met a god-like creature. It said that it would let me live again if I followed a certain condition. I don't know what it was, but I think it had to do with you. By the way, my name's Sarah. It was nice meeting you Albus." She then got her cards and ran off. Albus didn't know what thoughts went racing through his head.

 

Albus didn't talk about this to anybody. Instead he just decided to think about what this condition was. After school, he decided to look for Sarah. He saw her sitting on a bench with her head down.

 

"Hey Sarah."

 

She then looked up. he seemed surprised to see Albus. "Oh hi Albus."

 

"Do you want to take a walk?"

 

"Sure. Just a walk." They were walking for an hour without realizing that they were walking in circles. She then remembered the God's condition. "Sorry Albus, I gotta go now. Bye." She ran off.

 

"Bye," said Albus.

 

 

Since this is only Chapter 9 and none of Chapter 8 or 10, and it isn't word for word, this is absolutely free; it isn't necessary to give me points for it.

 

Thanks! I'll rewrite probably better than the last time =D

[Kuro no Keiyakushu]

[spoiler=Chapter 9]The Girl that Survived

 

Albus and Spade woke up the next day, but one spot was empty. Leo's spot. Everybody noticed Leo was missing, though only Albus and Sam knew why. It was said that he left duel Academy.

 

It was still an average day except for the fact that the classes were much quieter. Albus then continued walking through the average hallway. He then bumped into a girl who was running to get to class. All of her cards flew out of her hand. Albus then started to pick up the cards. He then saw his hand planted on top of hers. He blushed.

 

"Sorry about that," said Albus. "I'll help you pick those up. By the way, my name's Albus. H-H-How's it -!"

 

"Oh, don't worry, it -! Wait! You're Albus?" asked the girl, "Sorry, it's a long story, so ummm, I should be going."

 

"You can explain it to me."

 

"Well, I nearly died from blood loss, but at that time I met a god-like creature. It said that it would let me live again if I followed a certain condition. I don't know what it was, but I think it had to do with you. By the way, my name's Sarah. It was nice meeting you Albus." She then got her cards and ran off. Albus didn't know what thoughts went racing through his head.

 

Albus didn't talk about this to anybody. Instead he just decided to think about what this condition was. After school, he looked for Sarah. He saw her sitting on a bench with her head down.

 

"Hey Sarah."

 

She then looked up. he seemed surprised to see Albus. "Oh, hi Albus."

 

"Do you want to, you know, just like take a walk, nothing special?"

 

"Sure. Just a walk." They were walking and talking for an hour without realizing that they were walking in circles. She then remembered the God's condition. "Sorry Albus, I gotta go now. Bye." She ran off.

 

"Bye," said Albus. He was only a bit confused. Since it was late, he went back to his dorm room only to find a student sitting on Leo's bed.

 

"That spot is only for Leo! Don't expect to stay here for long because I'm going to bring him back!" Albus shouted before realizing what just came out of his mouth, "I'm sorry, it's just, just that of friend of mine is, nevermind. My name's Albus."

 

"Oh, it's fine. I'm sure there is a reason you're mad. Anyway, the name's Alexander Wallace, but Alex works," said Alex, well I guess I'm your new roommate until your Leo friend comes back. G'night.

 

Albus said good night and the two along with Spade went to bed.

 

The next day would be no ordinary day. Albus got up and ready way before class started to take a walk outside. He thought about how he was going to bring Leo back until he saw Sarah walk out of Duel Academy.

 

"Hi Albus," she said, "Sorry I had to go last night. It's just that I want you to be safe. Not like there's anything happening. Between, oh nevermind! Well, it seems that the more I hang out with you, the more I remember from that time long ago."

 

"As long as I got my game on, what could -!" Albus saw Sarah lean closer and closer until she kissed him and turned around.

 

"I, uh, well," said Albus as he grasped for words.

 

"I don't want you to get hurt," she said, "Because the special condition was a Shadow Duel between you and me. I don't want you to go. Not now, not ever. Because I -!" Sarah ran off before she finished her sentence.

 

Albus stood stunned. He decided to go back into Duel Academy. But before he could reach out to open the doors, a guy walked out and bumped into him purposely.

 

"What the heck was that for?!" shouted Albus.

 

"I don't have time to chit-chat. Let's duel!"

 

"Fine! First you bump into me. Now you wanna duel? I'll wipe the floor with you!"

 

"LETS DUEL!" they both shouted.

[Mysty]

[spoiler=Chapter 9]The Girl that Survived

 

Albus and Spade woke up the next day' date=' but one spot was empty. Leo's spot. Everybody noticed Leo was missing, though only Albus and Sam knew why. It was said that he left duel Academy.

 

It was still an average day except for the fact that the classes were much quieter. Albus then continued walking through the average hallway. He then bumped into a girl who was running to get to class. All of her cards flew out of her hand. Albus then started to pick up the cards. He then saw his hand planted on top of hers. He blushed.

 

"Sorry about that," said Albus. "I'll help you pick those up. By the way, my name's Albus. H-H-How's it -!"

 

"Oh, don't worry, it -! Wait! You're Albus?" asked the girl, "Sorry, it's a long story, so ummm, I should be going."

 

"You can explain it to me."

 

"Well, I nearly died from blood loss, but at that time I met a god-like creature. It said that it would let me live again if I followed a certain condition. I don't know what it was, but I think it had to do with you. By the way, my name's Sarah. It was nice meeting you Albus." She then got her cards and ran off. Albus didn't know what thoughts went racing through his head.

 

Albus didn't talk about this to anybody. Instead he just decided to think about what this condition was. After school, he looked for Sarah. He saw her sitting on a bench with her head down.

 

"Hey Sarah."

 

She then looked up. he seemed surprised to see Albus. "Oh, hi Albus."

 

"Do you want to, you know, just like take a walk, nothing special?"

 

"Sure. Just a walk." They were walking and talking for an hour without realizing that they were walking in circles. She then remembered the God's condition. "Sorry Albus, I gotta go now. Bye." She ran off.

 

"Bye," said Albus. He was only a bit confused. Since it was late, he went back to his dorm room only to find a student sitting on Leo's bed.

 

"That spot is only for Leo! Don't expect to stay here for long because I'm going to bring him back!" Albus shouted before realizing what just came out of his mouth, "I'm sorry, it's just, just that of friend of mine is, nevermind. My name's Albus."

 

"Oh, it's fine. I'm sure there is a reason you're mad. Anyway, the name's Alexander Wallace, but Alex works," said Alex, well I guess I'm your new roommate until your Leo friend comes back. G'night.

 

Albus said good night and the two along with Spade went to bed.

 

The next day would be no ordinary day. Albus got up and ready way before class started to take a walk outside. He thought about how he was going to bring Leo back until he saw Sarah walk out of Duel Academy.

 

"Hi Albus," she said, "Sorry I had to go last night. It's just that I want you to be safe. Not like there's anything happening. Between, oh nevermind! Well, it seems that the more I hang out with you, the more I remember from that time long ago."

 

"As long as I got my game on, what could -!" Albus saw Sarah lean closer and closer until she kissed him and turned around.

 

"I, uh, well," said Albus as he grasped for words.

 

"I don't want you to get hurt," she said, "Because the special condition was a Shadow Duel between you and me. I don't want you to go. Not now, not ever. Because I -!" Sarah ran off before she finished her sentence.

 

Albus stood stunned. He decided to go back into Duel Academy. But before he could reach out to open the doors, a guy walked out and bumped into him purposely.

 

"What the heck was that for?!" shouted Albus.

 

"I don't have time to chit-chat. Let's duel!"

 

"Fine! First you bump into me. Now you wanna duel? I'll wipe the floor with you!"

 

"LETS DUEL!" they both shouted.

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Nice chapter dude. You added in the stuff that happened in that first bit of Chapter 10 too. I like where the Sarah Arc is going.

[Kuro no Keiyakushu]

[spoiler=Chapter 9]The Girl that Survived

 

Albus and Spade woke up the next day' date=' but one spot was empty. Leo's spot. Everybody noticed Leo was missing, though only Albus and Sam knew why. It was said that he left duel Academy.

 

It was still an average day except for the fact that the classes were much quieter. Albus then continued walking through the average hallway. He then bumped into a girl who was running to get to class. All of her cards flew out of her hand. Albus then started to pick up the cards. He then saw his hand planted on top of hers. He blushed.

 

"Sorry about that," said Albus. "I'll help you pick those up. By the way, my name's Albus. H-H-How's it -!"

 

"Oh, don't worry, it -! Wait! You're Albus?" asked the girl, "Sorry, it's a long story, so ummm, I should be going."

 

"You can explain it to me."

 

"Well, I nearly died from blood loss, but at that time I met a god-like creature. It said that it would let me live again if I followed a certain condition. I don't know what it was, but I think it had to do with you. By the way, my name's Sarah. It was nice meeting you Albus." She then got her cards and ran off. Albus didn't know what thoughts went racing through his head.

 

Albus didn't talk about this to anybody. Instead he just decided to think about what this condition was. After school, he looked for Sarah. He saw her sitting on a bench with her head down.

 

"Hey Sarah."

 

She then looked up. he seemed surprised to see Albus. "Oh, hi Albus."

 

"Do you want to, you know, just like take a walk, nothing special?"

 

"Sure. Just a walk." They were walking and talking for an hour without realizing that they were walking in circles. She then remembered the God's condition. "Sorry Albus, I gotta go now. Bye." She ran off.

 

"Bye," said Albus. He was only a bit confused. Since it was late, he went back to his dorm room only to find a student sitting on Leo's bed.

 

"That spot is only for Leo! Don't expect to stay here for long because I'm going to bring him back!" Albus shouted before realizing what just came out of his mouth, "I'm sorry, it's just, just that of friend of mine is, nevermind. My name's Albus."

 

"Oh, it's fine. I'm sure there is a reason you're mad. Anyway, the name's Alexander Wallace, but Alex works," said Alex, well I guess I'm your new roommate until your Leo friend comes back. G'night.

 

Albus said good night and the two along with Spade went to bed.

 

The next day would be no ordinary day. Albus got up and ready way before class started to take a walk outside. He thought about how he was going to bring Leo back until he saw Sarah walk out of Duel Academy.

 

"Hi Albus," she said, "Sorry I had to go last night. It's just that I want you to be safe. Not like there's anything happening. Between, oh nevermind! Well, it seems that the more I hang out with you, the more I remember from that time long ago."

 

"As long as I got my game on, what could -!" Albus saw Sarah lean closer and closer until she kissed him and turned around.

 

"I, uh, well," said Albus as he grasped for words.

 

"I don't want you to get hurt," she said, "Because the special condition was a Shadow Duel between you and me. I don't want you to go. Not now, not ever. Because I -!" Sarah ran off before she finished her sentence.

 

Albus stood stunned. He decided to go back into Duel Academy. But before he could reach out to open the doors, a guy walked out and bumped into him purposely.

 

"What the heck was that for?!" shouted Albus.

 

"I don't have time to chit-chat. Let's duel!"

 

"Fine! First you bump into me. Now you wanna duel? I'll wipe the floor with you!"

 

"LETS DUEL!" they both shouted.

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Nice chapter dude. You added in the stuff that happened in that first bit of Chapter 10 too. I like where the Sarah Arc is going.

 

Thanks MG. I finally figured out that there is a limit to words in a post -.-

So I have to put Chapters in a different post or on the website i created.

[Kuro no Keiyakushu]

MeGaBuMp!

[Ryno Dorcus]

Chap 9 was cool. Can't wait to find out who he is Dueling.

[Kuro no Keiyakushu]

Chap 9 was cool. Can't wait to find out who he is Dueling.

 

Might be a character from my contest who knows....

And thankies =D

[The Greatness]

Chap 9 was cool. Can't wait to find out who he is Dueling.

 

Might be a character from my contest who knows....

And thankies =D

 

wait you use real people in your fan fics? if so let me in. lol

[ThatPhantomGuy]

This fan-fic is pretty good. Keep up the good work!

[Kuro no Keiyakushu]

[justify]I am here to inform you good news and bad news. In this case, the bad news will come first. But, do not be shocked, the good news will make the bad news good. After reading a full 9 chapters of my fan-fic, I have decided to cancel it. Then why did I have a contests about it? Well, good news is that I'm restarting this fan-fic. Why? To make it even better. Same characters, same arcs, better story. I will try to get the prologue and the first chapter in during the day or night, but if I don't I guarantee it will be in by tomorrow. Thank you to the people who took the time to read this fan-fic and to the people who participated in my contest. Most of my thanks goes to NickLD, Asuka Reishim, groudondjango, and TDA-great. NickLD has drawn two great images for me and I am very grateful. Asuka Reishim, groudonjango, and TDA-great have created great supporting characters, but groudonjango has inspired me to make my story better and better. Thank you Mystery Guest for not giving up on my fan-fic and reading it from start to finish, no matter how bad it was in the beginning. For all you GFX'ers out there to see this big block of text, I am holding a contest to see who can make the best banner for this fan-fic. If you have any questions or comments, post here saying so or PM me and I will gladly respond. And by the way, I was too lazy to look over this semi-massive piece of text cake right here, so if you see grammar problems or anything of the such, ignore it.[/justify]

[Kuro no Keiyakushu]

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