Dog Lord Posted July 12, 2009 Report Share Posted July 12, 2009 Hello this is my first cardhope you like itEffectThis card cannot be Special Summoned from your graveyard. For Each card in your hand this card loses 500 ATK and 300 DEF. Once per turn you can Remove from play 1 monster with "Elemental Hero" in there name from your graveyard to Special Summon 1 monster from your hand which has ATK equil to or less to the Removed from play monster. If this card is the only card on your side of the field you can destroy 1 face down card on the field. If you use this effect this card can't attack this turn. Wwhen this card is destroyed by a Trap card effect you can Special Summon as many Removed from play monster as possible. For each card summoned by this effect you lose 1000 points of damage to your Life Points. At then end of your opponents 2nd turn destroy the summoned monsters. While this card is in your graveyard and your opponent declares an attack with a monster with 1500 or less ATK. You can Remove from play this card to Flip a cpin. If the result is Heads : Make the attack to a direct attack to your opponents Life Points. If the result is Tails : Make the attack to a direct attack. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
macsmack Posted July 12, 2009 Report Share Posted July 12, 2009 The pic is nice try to shorten out the effect 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dog Lord Posted July 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 12, 2009 Why its better having a long effector is it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted July 12, 2009 Report Share Posted July 12, 2009 Very good for a first card but improve OCG and Grammar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
macsmack Posted July 12, 2009 Report Share Posted July 12, 2009 even if it still a good card good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dog Lord Posted July 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 12, 2009 Ok Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Lightning Posted July 12, 2009 Report Share Posted July 12, 2009 You don't need to shorten out the effect. Long effects = awesome. Nice job for a first card, but proofread the effect and OCG (which is off) before you post! Nice job for a first card! 6/10. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zack was here :p Posted July 12, 2009 Report Share Posted July 12, 2009 nice card for first post good effect just fix it up a little Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dog Lord Posted July 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 12, 2009 Thanks for all the coments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted July 12, 2009 Report Share Posted July 12, 2009 OCG fix:"This card cannot be Special Summoned from your Graveyard. For each card in your hand decrease this cards ATK by 500 and its DEF by 300. Once per turn you can remove from play 1 monster with "Elemental Hero" in its name from your Graveyard to Special Summon 1 monster from your hand whose ATK is equal to or less then the removed monster's ATK. If this card is the only card on your side of the field you can destroy 1 face down card on the field. If you use this effect this card can't attack this turn. When this card is destroyed by a Trap Card you can Special Summon as many removed from play monster as possible. For each card Summoned by this effect you take 1000 points of damage. At then end of your opponents 2nd turn destroy the Summoned monsters. While this card is in your Graveyard and your opponent declares an attack with a monster with 1500 or less ATK, you can remove from play this card to Flip a cpin. If the result is Heads, your opponent takes damage equal to the attacking monster's ATK. If the result is Tails, the attack becomes a direct attack." This card has MANY OCG. =/. the pic is OK. i hate EH >< but no points taken for that since thats unfair. this effect is long =/ no its not "the longer the better" this effect is obnoxiously long and it should be shorten. right now it is OP since you card finish your opponent with you returning all removed monsters to the field. and its other effects can be greatly abused. And this card is immensely OP since its effects are EXTREMELY strong and its attack is that high =/. It might seem that this card isnt OP due to its first effect but it is because that is a situational effect. What if that was the last card in your hand? LOWER THE ATTACK. OCG errors (-3)OP Effects (-4)OP (-2)Obnoxious effect (-1)Overall: 9/20otherwise 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zack was here :p Posted July 12, 2009 Report Share Posted July 12, 2009 no prpblem any welcome her to this website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted July 12, 2009 Report Share Posted July 12, 2009 After the OCG fixes it's pretty good. Pic is cool. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dog Lord Posted July 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 12, 2009 Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 12, 2009 Report Share Posted July 12, 2009 too many effects and therefore is too powerful. Get rid of some 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dog Lord Posted July 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 No . I'm not getting rid of effects .fine i change its DEF to 1600and ATK to 2800 also when it summons back the monsters you lose 1000 Life Points for each and in the 2nd turn there gone what if the opponent destroys the monster with Lightining Vortexthen you lose life points for nothing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Assclown Posted July 13, 2009 Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 well then thats too bad and what are the odds? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rakesh Posted July 13, 2009 Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 Nice Card.7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragunnz Posted July 13, 2009 Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 I like it, but the other people are right, too long of an effect 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dog Lord Posted July 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 Fine then is this effect betterWhen this card is destroyed by a card effect add 1 Spell and Trap card from your graveyard to your hand. Its shorter so it must be better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ej3003 Posted July 13, 2009 Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 Well, i checked it over. i think all that it needs is the OCG errors to be fixed up. First off, for your first timer, i only c 3 mistakes in it and there either misspelled, or a typing error. (the typing error is the 'Wwhen' and 'cpin'. the other is 'equil' should be 'equal'.) that prity much sums it up. ill score it as a 8.5/10the picture is GREAT (11/10 for picture)(can i get some advice from u for animating pictures? i need help) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted July 13, 2009 Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 to many effects which Overpowers the card. good try though 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lacikus Posted July 13, 2009 Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 7/10 Good for NM. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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