gonzali Posted July 12, 2009 Report Share Posted July 12, 2009 This is my first card could you plz comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mazerrick Posted July 12, 2009 Report Share Posted July 12, 2009 Get a better pic... You have to think of an effect yourself Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rideouter Posted July 12, 2009 Report Share Posted July 12, 2009 Ya because that defeats the purpose of creating your own card. If you ask people for an effect they might as well make it their card instead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted July 13, 2009 Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 ^^agree with the above. you can make the effect and we can give you ideas to make it balanced or more interesting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ǚĺƫĩɱąƫë Ðûëĺĩșƫ Posted July 13, 2009 Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 The pic royally sucks (no offence) and you need to make your own effect 1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted July 13, 2009 Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 this needs to be locked for unfinished card. =/ think of an effect yourself and we can perfect it for you but we cant give you an effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
texasgotexas Posted July 13, 2009 Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 i sorta like it but why is there no bio 0_o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rideouter Posted July 13, 2009 Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 It's unfinished. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted July 13, 2009 Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 OCG fix:"When this card is Normal Summoned, remove all Spell and Trap Cards on the field from play. As long as the card is face-up on the field, your opponent cannot activate Trap Cards." OP. toss the last effect and increase its attack and its effect sounds a little to familiar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kingnova unlimited Posted July 13, 2009 Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 I agree with ^ ,the last effect needs to go. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gonzali Posted July 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 whats the last effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rideouter Posted July 13, 2009 Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 "As long as the card is face-up on the field, your opponent cannot activate Trap Cards." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 13, 2009 Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 remove that last effect, that's merely Jinzo's effect anyway 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Assclown Posted July 13, 2009 Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 if ur posting cards, post them in the first post!! Just click edit and copy paste the code into there. Since u havn't made ur mind up yet of which card ur posting, im not rating. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dwhale Posted August 6, 2009 Report Share Posted August 6, 2009 Wow He's new and this is how the members treat him. Report his thread. He's new and just needed help thinking up an effect that's no reason for everyone to freak out and tell him he sucks and for his 1st card the image isn't too terrible. This was mine ;D http://disidente.franticblog.com/wp-content/uploads/2007/06/pikachu.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kotaro Posted August 6, 2009 Report Share Posted August 6, 2009 OCG needs work and has already been corrected. The effect is a bit OP with no drawbacks. The pic isnt too bad but not good either. 7/10 for a first attempt. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-MasterX Posted August 6, 2009 Report Share Posted August 6, 2009 for your first card really good but on the image you must workrating 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sorablob5 Posted August 6, 2009 Report Share Posted August 6, 2009 that card is really awsome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XxXryanXxX2000 Posted August 6, 2009 Report Share Posted August 6, 2009 [/size][/font]HI im new to this but im really into yugioh and err this is my first card for a new dark emporer deck im makin i have alot more cards to show but this is my favourite of them err any good comments appreciated.sorry this is my card javascript:uploadtoimageshack();sorry guys how do you make your card appear bigger i know you have better things to do but help a guy out lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baragan Posted August 6, 2009 Report Share Posted August 6, 2009 4/10! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate_Card_Kreator Posted August 6, 2009 Report Share Posted August 6, 2009 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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