HanuKazamushi Posted July 13, 2009 Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 This card cannot be summoned unless "Toon World" is on the field. This card cannot attack on the same turn it is summoned. Pay 500 life points each time this monster attacks. When "Toon World" is destroyed this card is destroyed as well. If your opponent does not control a Toon monster on his/her side of the field this card can attack your opponents life points directly. For every FIEND monster in the graveyard this card is get 500 points of ATK power. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Card Constructor Posted July 13, 2009 Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 Last time I said something similar to what I'm about to say, I got ripped apart, but I dare to say it again! I STRONGLY think that the last bit of your effect should go more towards the front of your effect. This change DOES NOT impact the card AT ALL, but would make a little more sense when reading the card FOR THE FIRST TIME. I would place your last sentence after "This card cannot attack on the same turn it is summoned". JUST A SUGGESTION so don't tear me apart people!!! Interesting picture, though hardly fitting for YGO :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted July 13, 2009 Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 It's a bit dark for old Pegasus's light-hearted tastes, dontcha think? Might wanna throw a PG-13 warning up there for good measure. As for the effect...but the last bit should be... This card's ATK is equal to the number of Fiend-Type monsters in both player's Graveyards x500. (Go with a lower number, it's a bit overpowered as is.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HanuKazamushi Posted July 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 Do you know if I can take it off? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted July 13, 2009 Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 thats an awfully scary pic for a toon, toons are for children 6-under this is like 13-over like holy hush puppies other then that its preety good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 13, 2009 Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 that is one evil toon, but the idea is sound 7.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted July 13, 2009 Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 Yeah, you can just edit your post, remove the card and replace it with one with a different image...or replace it with a request to lock the thread. Whichever you prefer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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