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Vortex & Dimensional Gateway


Kardo333

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Negates an attack and destroys the attacking monster then you must discard one card from your hand with 2000 ATK or less if u dont have any you lose 1000 life point then you can summon and monster with 2500 ATK or less. If u want you can pay 1000 life points to bring a monster with 1500 or less ATK to the field from your hand/deck.

After that both players can bring back 1 trap card and 1 spell card from the graveyard.

 

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Discard 1 card from your hand then destroy one face-down spell or trap card on your opponents side of the field

then you must pay 1000 life points to summon a monster with 2100 ATK or less.

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what are the errors?

 

They're mainly in the fact that both cards seem to be at least two cards forced together. Dimensional Gateway has 4 different, seperate effects:

 

i) Activate only when a monster on your side of the field is attacked. Negate the attack and destroy the attacking monster.

 

ii) Discard 1 Monster Card from your hand with 2000 or less ATK and pay 1000 Life Points. Special Summon 1 Monster Card from your hand with 2500 or higher ATK.

 

iii) Pay 1000 Life Points. Special Summon 1 Monster Card with 1500 or lower ATK from your hand or Deck.

 

iv) Both players add 1 Spell Card and 1 Trap Card to their Decks from their Graveyards.

 

 

Whereas, "Vortex" is 2 different effects shoved together.

 

i) Discard 1 card from your hand. Destroy 1 face-down Spell or Trap Card on your opponent's side of the field.

 

ii) Pay 1000 Life Points. Special Summon 1 Monster Card with 2100 or lower ATK from your hand, Deck or Graveyard.

 

 

These two cards are basically six cards forced together. I suggest making the effects simpler. (The OCG has been fixed).

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