triplelet Posted July 14, 2009 Report Share Posted July 14, 2009 This is the one card I created so far and I want your peoples opinions! What do you think of this one card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain Murphy ☆ Posted July 14, 2009 Report Share Posted July 14, 2009 could use a better pic and a different effect it needs work 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
triplelet Posted July 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2009 Thanks for your opinion I appreciate it! Hopefully my next card will be better and my first choice be changed! Thanks again! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Entoir154 Posted July 14, 2009 Report Share Posted July 14, 2009 I may be a noob, but I really like it. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
triplelet Posted July 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2009 Thank you Entoir154! I hope I can keep creating good cards like this one! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Entoir154 Posted July 14, 2009 Report Share Posted July 14, 2009 Thank you Entoir154! I hope I can keep creating good cards like this one! You hope? I'm sure you'll do great! I'd be honored if you examined my cards! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lacikus Posted July 14, 2009 Report Share Posted July 14, 2009 This pic will be awesome if it you removed White color in the bottom:Sacrifice=Tribute8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
triplelet Posted July 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2009 I thank you lacikus for your comment! I will keep that in mind as a create other cards and think about changing my first one a little! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fish-eye Posted July 14, 2009 Report Share Posted July 14, 2009 pic is a little overused. the wording and OCG needs a bit of work. keep in mind that saying ATK is when your talking about the attack value of a monster and when talking about the position of a monster, then you would spell out "attack/defense". certain words like Life Points is always in CAPs. and when mentioning another card in the effect, put " " around the name of the card. hope this helps. and i hope you make more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Charizard Posted July 14, 2009 Report Share Posted July 14, 2009 Remove the white boarder and replace sacriface with tribute and it will be better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Casmy Posted July 14, 2009 Report Share Posted July 14, 2009 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
triplelet Posted July 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2009 Thanks everyone for your comments! I will keep all of this in mind! Hope you all have a nice day! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain Murphy ☆ Posted July 14, 2009 Report Share Posted July 14, 2009 i agree with everyone else if you remove the white border from around the pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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