My First Cards - Spirit Message

[[B.C.E.]]

Please don't just give me a rating and say "Good cards" or "Bad OCG and pictures". Please give me some good and honest feedback. I would really appreciate it because I really want to spend some time on these cards and I want to know how to make them better. So please talk to me and help me.

 

[spoiler=Destiny Board - Revised Edition]

[spoiler=Effect]At the end of each of your opponent's turns, place 1 "Spirit Message" card from your hand or your Deck face-up on the field. If it is from your Deck, then shuffle your Deck. Once per turn this card can be treated as 1 "Spirit Message" card in your Deck. If there is a face-up "Destiny Board" card or a face-up "Destiny Board - Revised Edition" on the field destroy this card. This card cannot be sent to the Graveyard by the effect of a "Spirit Message" card.

 

[spoiler=Credit]

 

 

 

[spoiler=The Cursed Artist]

[spoiler=Effect]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except with the effect of "Spirit Message 'C'". Once during the game, you can remove 1 "The Portrait's Secret" in your Graveyard from play when your opponent activates a Spell or Trap Card. The effect of that Spell or Trap Card that your opponent activated becomes "Send your entire hand to the Graveyard. Draw 1 card for each monster that was discarded by this cards effect".

 

[spoiler=Credit]

 

 

[spoiler=Effect]This card can only be placed on the field by the effect of "Destiny Board - Revised Edition". When "Spirit Message" cards "U", "R", "S", and "E" are all on your side of the field, send 1 "The Portrait's Secret" and all "Spirit Message" cards on your field to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "The Cursed Artist" from your hand or Deck.

 

[spoiler=Credit]Pokebeach (There was no link)

 

 

[spoiler=Effect]This card can only be placed on the field by the effect of "Destiny Board - Revised Edition".

 

[spoiler=Credit]Pokebeach (There was no link)

 

 

[spoiler=Effect]This card can only be placed on the field by the effect of "Destiny Board - Revised Edition". When "Spirit Message" cards "A", "G", and "E" are all on your side of the field, send 1 "Headless Knight" and all "Spirit Message" cards on your field to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "Headless Rider" from your hand or Deck.

 

[spoiler=Credit]Pokebeach (There was no link)

 

 

[spoiler=Effect]This card can only be placed on the field by the effect of "Destiny Board - Revised Edition". When "Spirit Message" cards "H", "A", "D", and "E" are all on your side of the field, send 1 "Gernia" and all "Spirit Message" cards on your field to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "King of the Gernia" from your hand or Deck.

 

[spoiler=Credit]Pokebeach (There was no link)

 

 

[spoiler=Effect]This card can only be placed on the field by the effect of "Destiny Board - Revised Edition".

 

[spoiler=Credit]Pokebeach (There was no link)

 

 

 

[spoiler=Reborn Goblin Soldier]

[spoiler=Effect]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except with the effect of "Spirit Message 'B'". Once during the game, you can remove 1 "Goblin Zombie" in your Graveyard from play, send the 3 top cards of your your opponent's Deck to the Graveyard. Inflict 300 damage to your opponent if a monster card is sent to the Graveyard by this cards effect.

 

[spoiler=Credit]

 

 

[spoiler=Effect]This card can only be placed on the field by the effect of "Destiny Board - Revised Edition". When "Spirit Message" cards "O", "N", and "E" are all on your side of the field, send 1 "Goblin Zombie" and all "Spirit Message" cards on your field to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "Reborn Goblin Soldier" from your hand or Deck.

 

[spoiler=Credit]Pokebeach (There was no link)

 

[spoiler=Effect]This card can only be placed on the field by the effect of "Destiny Board - Revised Edition".

 

[spoiler=Credit]Pokebeach (There was no link)

 

 

[spoiler=Effect]This card can only be placed on the field by the effect of "Destiny Board - Revised Edition". When "Spirit Message" cards "I", "G", "H", and "T" are all on your side of the field, send 1 "The Gross Ghost of Fled Dreams" and all "Spirit Message" cards on your field to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "The Gross Ghost of Night Terrors" from your hand or Deck.

 

[spoiler=Credit]Pokebeach (There was no link)

 

 

[spoiler=Effect]This card can only be placed on the field by the effect of "Destiny Board - Revised Edition".

 

[spoiler=Credit]Pokebeach (There was no link)

 

 

 

[spoiler=The Gross Ghost of Night Terrors]

[spoiler=Effect]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except with the effect of "Spirit Message 'N'". When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, the destroyed monster remains on your opponent's side of the field in Defense Position. You can remove 1 "The Gross Ghost of Fled Dreams" in your Graveyard from play, destroy all face-up Defense Position monsters on your opponent's side of the field, inflict 500 damage to your opponent for each monster destroyed by this cards effect.

 

[spoiler=Credit]

 

 

[spoiler=Effect]This card can only be placed on the field by the effect of "Destiny Board - Revised Edition". When "Spirit Message" cards "I", "G", "H", and "T" are all on your side of the field, send 1 "The Gross Ghost of Fled Dreams" and all "Spirit Message" cards on your field to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "The Gross Ghost of Night Terrors" from your hand or Deck.

 

[spoiler=Credit]Pokebeach (There was no link)

 

 

[spoiler=Effect]This card can only be placed on the field by the effect of "Destiny Board - Revised Edition".

 

[spoiler=Credit]Pokebeach (There was no link)

 

 

[spoiler=Effect]This card can only be placed on the field by the effect of "Destiny Board - Revised Edition".

 

[spoiler=Credit]Pokebeach (There was no link)

 

 

[spoiler=Effect]This card can only be placed on the field by the effect of "Destiny Board - Revised Edition".

 

[spoiler=Credit]Pokebeach (There was no link)

 

 

[spoiler=Effect]This card can only be placed on the field by the effect of "Destiny Board - Revised Edition".

 

[spoiler=Credit]Pokebeach (There was no link)

 

 

 

[spoiler=King of the Gernia][spoiler=Effect]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except with the effect of "Spirit Message 'S'". Once per turn, you can remove 1 "Gernia" in your Graveyard from play, Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Zombie-Type monster in your Graveyard to the field until the end of the End Phase.

[spoiler=Credit]

 

 

[spoiler=Effect]This card can only be placed on the field by the effect of "Destiny Board - Revised Edition". When "Spirit Message" cards "H", "A", "D", and "E" are all on your side of the field, send 1 "Gernia" and all "Spirit Message" cards on your field to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "King of the Gernia" from your hand or Deck.

 

[spoiler=Credit]Pokebeach (There was no link)

 

 

[spoiler=Effect]This card can only be placed on the field by the effect of "Destiny Board - Revised Edition".

 

[spoiler=Credit]Pokebeach (There was no link)

 

 

 

[spoiler=Effect]This card can only be placed on the field by the effect of "Destiny Board - Revised Edition".

 

[spoiler=Credit]Pokebeach (There was no link)

 

 

[spoiler=Effect]This card can only be placed on the field by the effect of "Destiny Board - Revised Edition". When "Spirit Message" cards "E", "A", "T", and "H" are all on your side of the field, send 1 "Dark Necrofear" and all "Spirit Message" cards on your field to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "Dark Necrobeast" from your hand or Deck.

 

[spoiler=Credit]Pokebeach (There was no link)

 

 

[spoiler=Effect]This card can only be placed on the field by the effect of "Destiny Board - Revised Edition".

 

[spoiler=Credit]Pokebeach (There was no link)

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=The Lord of Demise][spoiler=Effect]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except with the effect of "Spirit Message 'F'". You can remove 1 "The Earl of Demise" in your Graveyard from play, your opponent must remove all monsters in their graveyard from play, for each monster removed from play by this cards effect, inflict 200 damage to your opponent.

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[spoiler=Effect]This card can only be placed on the field by the effect of "Destiny Board - Revised Edition". When "Spirit Message" cards "E", "A", and "R" are all on your side of the field, send 1 "The Earl of Demise" and all "Spirit Message" cards on your field to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "The Lord of Demise" from your hand or Deck.

 

[spoiler=Credit]Pokebeach (There was no link)

 

 

[spoiler=Effect]This card can only be placed on the field by the effect of "Destiny Board - Revised Edition".

 

[spoiler=Credit]Pokebeach (There was no link)

 

 

[spoiler=Effect]This card can only be placed on the field by the effect of "Destiny Board - Revised Edition".

 

[spoiler=Credit]Pokebeach (There was no link)

 

 

[spoiler=Effect]This card can only be placed on the field by the effect of "Destiny Board - Revised Edition". When "Spirit Message" cards "A", "G", and "E" are all on your side of the field, send 1 "Headless Knight" and all "Spirit Message" cards on your field to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "Headless Rider" from your hand or Deck.

 

[spoiler=Credit]Pokebeach (There was no link)

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=Headless Rider]

[spoiler=Effect]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except with the effect of "Spirit Message 'R'". Once during the game, you can remove 1 "Headless Knight" in your Graveyard from the game, destroy 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field, this card gains 500 ATK points. If the monster destroyed by this cards effect is removed from your opponent's Graveyard, this card loses 500 ATK points.

 

[spoiler=Credit]

 

 

[spoiler=Effect]This card can only be placed on the field by the effect of "Destiny Board - Revised Edition". When "Spirit Message" cards "A", "G", and "E" are all on your side of the field, send 1 "Headless Knight" and all "Spirit Message" cards on your field to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "Headless Rider" from your hand or Deck.

 

[spoiler=Credit]Pokebeach (There was no link)

 

 

[spoiler=Effect]This card can only be placed on the field by the effect of "Destiny Board - Revised Edition".

 

[spoiler=Credit]Pokebeach (There was no link)

 

 

[spoiler=Effect]This card can only be placed on the field by the effect of "Destiny Board - Revised Edition".

 

[spoiler=Credit]Pokebeach (There was no link)

 

 

[spoiler=Effect]This card can only be placed on the field by the effect of "Destiny Board - Revised Edition".

 

[spoiler=Credit]Pokebeach (There was no link)

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=Dark Necrobeast]

[spoiler=Effect]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except with the effect of "Spirit Message 'D'". Once during the game, you can remove 1 "Dark Necrofear" in your Graveyard from play, take control of 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field. If this monster is destroyed by battle, you can Tribute 2 Zombie-Type monster on your side of the field, Special Summon this monster from your Graveyard.

 

[spoiler=Credit]

 

 

[spoiler=Effect]This card can only be placed on the field by the effect of "Destiny Board - Revised Edition". When "Spirit Message" cards "E", "A", "T", and "H" are all on your side of the field, send 1 "Dark Necrofear" and all "Spirit Message" cards on your field to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "Dark Necrobeast" from your hand or Deck.

 

[spoiler=Credit]Pokebeach (There was no link)

 

 

[spoiler=Effect]This card can only be placed on the field by the effect of "Destiny Board - Revised Edition".

 

[spoiler=Credit]Pokebeach (There was no link)

 

 

[spoiler=Effect]This card can only be placed on the field by the effect of "Destiny Board - Revised Edition".

 

[spoiler=Credit]Pokebeach (There was no link)

 

 

[spoiler=Effect]This card can only be placed on the field by the effect of "Destiny Board - Revised Edition".

 

[spoiler=Credit]Pokebeach (There was no link)

 

 

[spoiler=Effect]This card can only be placed on the field by the effect of "Destiny Board - Revised Edition".

 

[spoiler=Credit]Pokebeach (There was no link)

 

 

 

[Max Darkness]

What's with these cards? They look...different and odd.

Anyway, it's advised you don't make remakes of existing cards; don't use the Unown to represent spirit messages (especially if they are siphoned from the Pokemon TCG); your OCG is relatively good, but there are errors.

Overall, these are good for a New Member, but they all revolve around "Destiny Board", so are vulnerable to anti-Trap strategies.

[Postman Pat]

What's with these cards? They look...different and odd.

Anyway' date=' it's advised you don't make remakes of existing cards; don't use the [b']Unown[/b] to represent spirit messages (especially if they are siphoned from the Pokemon TCG); your OCG is relatively good, but there are errors.

Overall, these are good for a New Member, but they all revolve around "Destiny Board", so are vulnerable to anti-Trap strategies.

 

Lol you used the pokemon name instead of the real word Unknown

lol

[Necro Pheonix]

these are really good cards for a good member, but they do have OCG errors. I agree that the cards look weird but they are nice. check out this therad for some card help.

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-137084-post-2586052.html#pid2586052

[Max Darkness]

What's with these cards? They look...different and odd.

Anyway' date=' it's advised you don't make remakes of existing cards; don't use the [b']Unown[/b] to represent spirit messages (especially if they are siphoned from the Pokemon TCG); your OCG is relatively good, but there are errors.

Overall, these are good for a New Member, but they all revolve around "Destiny Board", so are vulnerable to anti-Trap strategies.

 

Lol you used the pokemon name instead of the real word Unknown

lol

 

That's because that's what Unown are called.

[[B.C.E.]]

What's with these cards? They look...different and odd.

What do you mean :shock: ? Anyway thanks for commenting I will try to fix the OCG errors and I understand about remaking cards. I just enjoyed making these cards that I completely forgot about that.

[Max Darkness]

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What's with these cards? They look...different and odd.

What do you mean :shock: ?

 

Well' date=' because if I were to compare your "Destiny Board" with one of my traps (made and uploaded on this site):

 

[spoiler=Yours on the Left, Mine on the Right']

 

 

 

 

you can see that:

- They are a different size

- The fonts are different (as well as the sizing)

- The 'Trap' logo doesn't (on mine) look pasted on

- If you look closely, the effect text is further from the border on my card.

- Mine's also a slightly different shade of violet.

- And the 'holo' in the bottom-right is both darker and a slightly different image on my card.

 

Also, you've uploaded the card with Photobucket, when you could easily upload it using the Card Maker part of this site.