[OnSlaUghT's Cards] ALIEN HYBRID and ALIEN ROYAL GUARD *1 rep for a review like a good critic*

[OnSlaUghT]

Well I've been on this site for almost a year, and to commemorate, I've remade one of my old cards from my first set "Alien Evolution". If you have a suggestion, or you want to see more cards from me, feel free to tell me!

 

 

Image credit goes to randis at deviantart

 

EDIT: Added new card

Image found on Deviantart

 

[spoiler=EDIT]The card says "Alien Hive" in the card text for Alien Hybrid, one of the other cards I made, here's the effect

 

Alien Hive

Field Spell Card

Pay 1000 Life Points when you activate this card. During the damage calculation only, increase the ATK of all "Alien" monsters you control by 300 for every monster your opponent controls with an A-Counter on it.

 

Sorry for the inconvenience.

 

[Skippy Canoe]

Picture: 10/10

OCG: 10/10

Effect: 8/10

 

Overall: 9/10

 

Cool card! :D

[Max Darkness]

Quite a useful card, but I would have thought that an "Alien" effect like that would special summon a Level 4 or lower "Alien" monster in return for a non-"Alien" monster on your side of the field.

Overall, these cards are pretty balanced but might become overpowered (especially "Alien Hive"). To that end, you might wish to change "Alien Hive"'s cost to a turnly one, not a one-off burn, possibly based on the number of monsters on your opponent's side of the field.

There are also a couple of OCG errors that I can see.

 

"Alien Hive": Pay 1000 Life Points to activate this card.

 

These cards are good, but I have a suspicion that they could become overpowered as they are.

 

9/10

[OnSlaUghT]

Finally some feedback! +rep awarded

[Maxdmilleo]

lol that chick has big boobs

[OnSlaUghT]

lol that chick has big boobs

 

um...ok

the image doesn't belong to me however. I just used it because it looked cool.

[Lord Smeagle]

Max Darkness pretty much covered Alien Hive, but Hybrid's effect is also pretty exploitable. You could use it to mill quite a few Aliens into the Graveyard in a single turn, then combo with Evil Dragon Ananta. Might want to put another restriction on it.

[bLinD (:]

Pic: 10/10

OCG: 10/10

Effect: 9/10

Total: 29/30 Very nice card, perfect ocg, great pic.

[OnSlaUghT]

Thanks for pointing that out! + Rep awarded to Lord smeagle

 

sorry blind, the review wasn't like a critic.

[Maxdmilleo]

Damn me and my stupidness

[OnSlaUghT]

Damn me and my stupidness

 

how, your post was lulz

[Maxdmilleo]

lul i can also be funny hear have a rep

 

EDIT: sorry outa reps :(

[ragnarok1945]

picture and OCG are perfect, though the effect is slightly meh

 

8.9/10

[OnSlaUghT]

EDIT: This post was out of timing. Sorry for the confusion

[Maxdmilleo]

holy crap i just realized......that alien is a rapist 0_0

[Lord Smeagle]

Yeah. The only reason I say that is I run an Alien deck, and dumping Aliens in the Graveyard en masse to fuel Ananta is part of the strategy. If I had a card like this, games would be over very fast.

[Maxdmilleo]

umereerraum....its a rapist kill it!!!

[OnSlaUghT]

Not really, i'm sure if the women weren't there you would say different

[Ģค๓blє]

I like it. It would really help out in an Alien deck.

 

9/10

 

P.S. I was thinking of an Alien Set about 3 days ago. Might again if you won't be mad.

[Maxdmilleo]

Indeed i would id say it was a great alien picwith a awsome alien and formidable opponent the effect aint half bad and its just perfect brillant in tight situtions, so overall my rating is Ten out of Ten.

[mappel6]

Hmm... I would say 9/10 because the effect would make it OP'd, but otherwise, pretty niice card http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/images/smilies/icon_biggrin.gif

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*nice, and the smilie doesn't work :(

[OnSlaUghT]

Indeed i would id say it was a great alien picwith a awsome alien and formidable opponent the effect aint half bad and its just perfect brillant in tight situtions' date=' so overall my rating is Ten out of Ten.

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i'm guessing you just posted to get the rep. whatever +rep awarded, but i'm out for today

[Maxdmilleo]

Youll just have to rep me tommorow.

[OnSlaUghT]

well i'm out for today, remind me on friday

[Maxdmilleo]

Ok also wanna be freinds?