bLinD (: Posted July 15, 2009 Report Share Posted July 15, 2009 That's my first card here hope u like ^^ Effect:The effect of this card only can be activated when your opponent declares an attack to a monster you control. Change the attack to Galactic Espiral Dragon. When this card is sent to the graveyard, you can summon one Dragon from your hand with more than 5 Stars without sacrificing. Sorry about the OCG errors, i'm brazilian ;p Edit: I changed the effect. Thanks to OnSlaUghT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OnSlaUghT Posted July 15, 2009 Report Share Posted July 15, 2009 Nice effect, I was thinking you can make the effect say '6 stars or less' instead than '5 or more' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jaxx541 Posted July 15, 2009 Report Share Posted July 15, 2009 the effect is original but your OCG needs work... pic is good and i like that you didnt use a fake type.. this is a WIN!!! 10.1/10.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
everlasting Posted July 15, 2009 Report Share Posted July 15, 2009 nice card, with a few errors, though. capitialize Graveyard, and change summon to Special Summon. 8/10 for a new member Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cato 999 Posted July 15, 2009 Report Share Posted July 15, 2009 Sweet picture and effect.I'm new too but you outclass me by a long shot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bLinD (: Posted July 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2009 Thx for the rates and thx for the comments (: OnSlaUghT: Thx for the comment and thx for the tip! Jaxx541: Thx for rate! i'll try to make the next card better everlasting: Thx for the comment and for the rate. i'll work my OCG nexst time! (; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sparta™ Posted July 15, 2009 Report Share Posted July 15, 2009 summon = Special Summon (The way you said it in the effect made it a Special Summon.)sacrificing = Tributinggraveyard = GraveyardGalactic Espiral Dragon = "Galactic Espiral Dragon" Notice the capitalizations, you NEED to put them in. ^_^ Nice pic, great originality, 9.2/10 For a New Member. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
regalsword65 Posted July 15, 2009 Report Share Posted July 15, 2009 Nice! This is really great! Although the OCG is a little off.........YOU ROCK!!!! 9999/10! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bLinD (: Posted July 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2009 Thx computerwhiz98. I'm a new member but i always see this site, and i know you are a "pro" in make cards, then a rate as your is fantastic! im emotioned .-. hehe thx too regalsword65, but i think 9999/10 is a little exagerate ;-p Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OnSlaUghT Posted July 15, 2009 Report Share Posted July 15, 2009 OCG and Effect change: When your opponent selects a monster you control as an attack target, you can change the attack target to "Galactic Espiral Dragon". When this card is sent to the graveyard, you can Special Summon 1 Level 6 or lower Dragon-Type monster from your hand. The first sentence in your version contradicts the second effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bLinD (: Posted July 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2009 Thx OnSlaUghT i'll change now! (: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mizore-Shirayuki Posted July 16, 2009 Report Share Posted July 16, 2009 this is surprisingly awesome for a first card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OnSlaUghT Posted July 16, 2009 Report Share Posted July 16, 2009 this is surprisingly awesome for a first card yeah i know. He kinda resembles.... ME! @the topic creator: the pic is still the same, to change it you'll have to re-upload the pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 16, 2009 Report Share Posted July 16, 2009 OCG looks fine. Effect is very good, so you'll get 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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