Card Prototypes (Should I Continue?) 10/10

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Im Basing my cards on a online card game Uraban Rivals www.urban-rivals.com <--- If you dont know the game click here and for a quick summary copy and paste http://www.tcgplayer.com/db/game_review.asp?AID=2008&PID=33&DBID=4

 

So basically im in love with this game and my idea is to put the cards levels as ranks which may get complicated ill do Effects as close as i can to the real thing and for Bonuses ill do the actual same thing is there are to of the same type of the field then you get the effect

 

For types i thougth of putting them into real types but it would be to hard so i have put there clan as the type so here are my first 4 cards Slopsh! Tell me what you think

I know the pictures suck but that was the only pictures i could locate

 

I fail at ocg so please also correct that even if you dont like the cards

 

Slopsh Lv 4s Effect=This card cannot be normal summon or set this card can only be speical summoned by sending 1 'Sakrohm - Slopsh Lv 3 'from your side of the field to the graveyard. If there are 2 monsters with 'Sakrohm -'in their name on your side of the field, Apply this effect the card this monster battles loses 800 ATK. During damage calculation this card gains ATK equal to the diffrence between your opponents monster

Chill Lv 4s Effect =This card cannot be normal summoned or set this card can only be speical summoned by sending 1 'Jungo - Chill lv 3'. If there are 2 monsters with 'Jungo -' in their name on your side of the field, Apply this effect, when this card defeats a opponents monster and sends it to the graveyard you gain 200 LP.This card gains 700 ATK during your battle phase only

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The OCG is actually pretty good; better than mine was for most of my early cards. Only thing i can really say is get better pics and these cards would be pretty good. Try deviantart, they tend to have fan-art for everything so just search slopsh or urban rivals and see what you can get.

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The OCG is actually pretty good; better than mine was for most of my early cards. Only thing i can really say is get better pics and these cards would be pretty good. Try deviantart' date=' they tend to have fan-art for everything so just search slopsh or urban rivals and see what you can get.

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I know the pictures suck but there the only ones i can find im off to look for more on deviant art but if i dont then im screwed thanks for your comment.

[everlasting]

well, these aren't the worst I've seen, however, fake types, and I would try to rework the names ( possibly Slopsh - beginner, apprentice, warrior, master??)

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well' date=' these aren't the worst I've seen, however, fake types, and I would try to rework the names ( possibly Slopsh - beginner, apprentice, warrior, master??)

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Thats a good idea but fake types are the whole point of my cards because thats there clan and makes the bonuses work easier as yugioh cards

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bump?

[zombiepromking]

The 2 new cards are just as good although real types would e a good idea i'd say Slopsh would be aqua and Borss would be Beast-Warrior. But keep it up.

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The 2 new cards are just as good although real types would e a good idea i'd say Slopsh would be aqua and Borss would be Beast-Warrior. But keep it up.

 

Thanks but what would i do about the clans maybe put them some where in the card name could you say where you would think best

[zombiepromking]

Thanks but what would i do about the clans maybe put them some where in the card name could you say where you would think best

 

I'd say maybe put it in the card name like "Sakrohm - Slopsh Rank 2" also maybe making these LV monsters would make it easier.

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Thanks but what would i do about the clans maybe put them some where in the card name could you say where you would think best

 

I'd say maybe put it in the card name like "Sakrohm - Slopsh Rank 2" also maybe making these LV monsters would make it easier.

All Redone Zombies iDea has come to life and i love them

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making more cards as we speak

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bump please i need to know if i should continue

[zombiepromking]

you should keep it up, i can only say what i said before: Get better pics and the OCG is awesome. But i know the first part of that isn't possible so all i i can say is, Good Work!

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Thanks Alot!

[Lewk]

Inspiring! I love Slopsh! 10/10