Haratake Posted July 16, 2009 Report Share Posted July 16, 2009 [align=center][spoiler=Graceful Ninja] Effect: When this card is destroyed as a result of battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Graceful" monster from your Deck or hand. [spoiler=Graceful Magician] Effect: If this card is Special Summoned by the effect of another card, change the Position of 1 of your opponent's monsters. [spoiler=Graceful Assailant] [spoiler=Call of Grace] Spell: If a monster you control is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can select 1 "Graceful" monster from your Deck and add it to your hand. The Deck is then shuffled. [spoiler=Grace Dragon of Light + Dragon's Grace] Effect: This monster can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Magic card, "Dragon's Grace". You must also offer monsters whose total Level Stars equal 8 or more as a Tribute from the field or your hand. If one of the Tributed monsters were "Graceful Dragon Tamer" raise the ATK of this card by 500. While another "Graceful" monster is on your side of the Field, this card cannot be targeted by your opponent's Spell or Trap cards. Spell: This card is used to Ritual Summon "Grace Dragon of Light". You must also offer monsters whose total Level Stars equal 8 or more as a Tribute from the field or your hand. [spoiler=Graceful Dragon Tamer] Effect: As long as this card remains face-up on the field, increase the ATK and DEF of all Dragon Type monsters on the your side of the field by 300 points. [spoiler=Maze of the Graced] Spell: Increase the ATK and DEF of all "Graceful" and Dragon-Type monsters by 500 points. Also decrease the ATK and DEF of all Dark monsters by 200 points. This card may only be activated when "Call of Grace" is in the Graveyard. If "Call of Grace" is removed from play send this card to the Graveyard. [spoiler=Dragon's Awakening] Spell: If "Graceful Dragon Tamer" is on your side of the field, add 1 "Dragon's Grace" from your Deck to your hand. [spoiler=Dangerous Situation] Trap: If a monster on your side of the field is sent to the Graveyard as a result of battle, your opponent must randomly discard 1 card from their hand to the Graveyard. You may draw 1 card from your Deck. First one, first post, first everything! >=OPretty plain cards, just testing this out. IMG Credit: Google Images.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Justice Knight Posted July 16, 2009 Report Share Posted July 16, 2009 Congrats on your first card! The image is good, and the OCG is pretty solid. I'd probably have to see some other "Graceful" monsters to know how effective it really is, though. The only things I'd fix are:~ 1 monster with "Graceful" in its card name --> 1 "Graceful" monster~ Hand --> hand~ remove "to your side of the field" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haratake Posted July 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2009 Ah, alright.Thank you for your critique, and I'll fix it in a sec. *EDIT* It's fixed now. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Justice Knight Posted July 16, 2009 Report Share Posted July 16, 2009 You're very welcome. Good luck in the future. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haratake Posted July 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2009 Thank you. Added another card to the Graceful set, not sure about the OCG, though.Kinda went freehand on that one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Justice Knight Posted July 16, 2009 Report Share Posted July 16, 2009 Hmm...I'd try this:~ an effect --> the effect~ position --> Position~ monster(s) --> monsters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haratake Posted July 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2009 Fixed. Thank you, once again. =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Justice Knight Posted July 16, 2009 Report Share Posted July 16, 2009 You're welcome, again. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haratake Posted July 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2009 Fffffff, finding pictures and getting the OCG to seem correct are the hardest parts. D= Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Justice Knight Posted July 16, 2009 Report Share Posted July 16, 2009 I agree; those are probably the hardest parts. But once you've got those, the rest is easy. And you've done a good job with both of those so far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 16, 2009 Report Share Posted July 16, 2009 I like graceful ninja better. Pic seems to suit it more 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haratake Posted July 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2009 Thanks for the rating, ragnarok. Yeah, I agree as well.As for the magician, I couldn't find a decent picture with the correct, or around correct, dimensions to fit the area without stretching. x_xThanks, Justice. =D Added a Graceful Assailant. >_> Lawl. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Justice Knight Posted July 16, 2009 Report Share Posted July 16, 2009 Be careful, people around here don't seem to like vanillas (Normal Monsters). I'll shield you from flamers, though. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haratake Posted July 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2009 Awww, why not. D=To retaliate, I made a spell card! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Justice Knight Posted July 16, 2009 Report Share Posted July 16, 2009 Oh snap! :D OCG Correction: If a monster you control is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can select 1 "Graceful" monster from your Deck and add it to your hand. The Deck is then shuffled. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Assclown Posted July 16, 2009 Report Share Posted July 16, 2009 Be careful' date=' people around here don't seem to like vanillas (Normal Monsters).[/quote'] Damn right XD My comp wont load the cards but I read the effects anyway. Based on the effects....not too crappy OCG and not completely creative but good. 7 / 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haratake Posted July 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2009 Thanks, guys, for the rating and feedback.Fixed up the spell card. *EDIT* Added 3 new cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haratake Posted July 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2009 Bump, any more comments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haratake Posted July 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2009 Added two spell cards, and one trap card.Comments, please! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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