Eury Posted July 16, 2009 Report Share Posted July 16, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lost Soul Posted July 16, 2009 Report Share Posted July 16, 2009 good concept, although here are the errors:Cards #1Zombie Type should be Zombie-typeUndead should be "Undead" since it is part of a card name(s)Card #2Bad picture, google or deviantart "Undead Dragon" to get a better picZombie and Dragon Type should be Zombie- and Dragon-typeBattle is just battlea little overpowered for a Level 7 monster, make it a Level 8.so 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silver Slipstream Posted July 16, 2009 Report Share Posted July 16, 2009 Your pictures would be ok yet they are blurry. You OCG is off. And the effect of you Graveyard is a tiny bit Overpowering in my eyes due to the last effect. Your Dragon is overpowering. Lower his attack maybe? And it's effect is overpowering too.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted July 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2009 is this better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silver Slipstream Posted July 16, 2009 Report Share Posted July 16, 2009 The graveyard card yes but its picture, no. The monster is still overpowering. The first effect needs to either go or be lowered i think to maybe 1000 or less and the last effect should be lowered as well to maybe 1500? But your monster's picture is loads better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted July 16, 2009 Report Share Posted July 16, 2009 Ok definitly agreeing with Silver on this one. Also your OCG is off. change the graveyard cards pic. everything else was hit by Silver ^^ 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 16, 2009 Report Share Posted July 16, 2009 undead dragon's atk is too high for lv7. I'd drop it down to 2600 or something OCG needs a little work 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted July 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2009 ??? Is ok now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 16, 2009 Report Share Posted July 16, 2009 that's slightly better, now I'll raise the rating to 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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