Eternal Lords! 5/??

[Neo-MasterX]

sure you can make more then those but with a better image quality

the image quality is too dark.

 

Rating 4/10

[Protheus]

10/10

[Radiant F.U.R.Y.™]

Need a lil work...but overall, they're okay. Although, you really shouldn't change the standard EI effect. Should always be as follows IMO:

There can only be 1 face-up "Earthbound Immortal" monster on the field. If there is no face-up Field Spell Card on the field, destroy this card. Your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target. This card can attack your opponent directly.

 

Dont really like the no special summon tacked on the beginning, but that is proper placement, and with only 500 ATK, I can see it being SS'ed easily; so I see why you pu it on there. The other monsters need to lose this effect though. It just doesn't suit the Immortals very well.

 

Effect does not adress what happens when there are more than 3 Beasts are in the Graveyard. As it is written now, it gains no extra effect if you have 0 or 4 or more beasts in the grave...

 

Mainly this rate is for the bear, b/c I only briefly glanced at the other cards. Overall rating is 6/10. Effects need work, not for being OP, but for streamlining purposes. These are, IMO, OC (Overly Complicated).

 

If you want some more input and suggestions, PM me and I'd be glad to share suggestions w/ you.

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Sorry for necro...forgot to check date :(

[Earthbound Ojamortal!]

the first effeect is OP and the last effect needs to go because this card cant even be attacked =/

 

andyways 6/10

Read it again. it says it cant be attacked UNLESS its the only monster you control.