Eury Posted July 16, 2009 Report Share Posted July 16, 2009 My 10th card. If it is OP'd please tell me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 16, 2009 Report Share Posted July 16, 2009 effect somewhat too dull, pic is pretty good though 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blue eyes 96 Posted July 16, 2009 Report Share Posted July 16, 2009 should be reptial 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SwineRider Posted July 16, 2009 Report Share Posted July 16, 2009 The first and most importat thing I rate is the image. And your Crystal Dragon looks very nice. Keep up this kind of artwork-selection and you'll make lots of great cards =)Now to the OCG: "This card gains 100 ATK and DEF for each "Crystal Beast" monster in your Graveyard. You can pay 300 Life Points during your Main Phase. If you don't, this card is destroyed." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
macsmack Posted July 16, 2009 Report Share Posted July 16, 2009 like the card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted July 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2009 Better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SwineRider Posted July 16, 2009 Report Share Posted July 16, 2009 better, but still not good. search for the ocg thread here and read. as for this card, just copy this: "This card gains 100 ATK and DEF for each "Crystal Beast" monster in your Graveyard. You can pay 300 Life Points during your Main Phase. If you don't, this card is destroyed." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Justice Knight Posted July 17, 2009 Report Share Posted July 17, 2009 It's got kind of a boring effect, but the picture is really nice and the OCG will be fine if you do what Cetanu says. 7.5/10 overall. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted July 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2009 I did what Cetanu said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Justice Knight Posted July 17, 2009 Report Share Posted July 17, 2009 Change "This card is powered up 100 points" to "This card gains 100 ATK and DEF". Also, change "You can pay" to "You must pay". I'm pretty sure that's how it should be, but I could be wrong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted July 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2009 Here we go.That should be good.Edit: changed must to can Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Revolution A Minute Posted July 17, 2009 Report Share Posted July 17, 2009 I like the card and im sure the pic is a duel monsters card Edit: yeah it is ive found it in my collection Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted July 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2009 Really? I've never seen this pic until today on deviantart. Whats the actual card's name? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Subtlety Posted July 17, 2009 Report Share Posted July 17, 2009 This card gains 100 ATK/DEF for every "Crystal Beast" monster in your Graveyard. You must pay 300 Life Points during your Main Phase 1. If you don't, this card is destroyed. If this card is destroyed while it is in a Monster Card Zone, you can place it face-up in your Spell & Trap Card Zone as a Continuous Spell Card, instead of sending it to the Graveyard. also: you should lower its Attack. crystal beasts arent that powerful Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Machovict Posted July 17, 2009 Report Share Posted July 17, 2009 should be reptial 5/10 ...Why? Change "This card is powered up 100 points" to "This card gains 100 ATK and DEF". Also' date=' change "You can pay" to "You must pay". I'm pretty sure that's how it should be, but I could be wrong.[/quote'] No, keep it "You can pay..." so that way the player can get rid of it if their LP are too low. Also, that 300 Life Point cost should probably be upped a little. And the first line would sound better if it said "This card gains 100 ATK and DEF...". This card gains 100 ATK/DEF for every "Crystal Beast" monster in your Graveyard. You must pay 300 Life Points during your Main Phase 1. If you don't' date=' this card is destroyed. If this card is destroyed while it is in a Monster Card Zone, you can place it face-up in your Spell & Trap Card Zone as a Continuous Spell Card, instead of sending it to the Graveyard.[/quote'] I don't think it's a Crystal Beast itself, so it wouldn't go to the Spell/Trap Zone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted July 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2009 Poisonedbite yes there is a crystal beast that strong or at least it relates to crystal beasts theres rainbow dragon which if i remember is a bit stronger than this card yeah rainbow dragon is a lot stronger than this i mean ALOT stronger Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ALupis Posted July 17, 2009 Report Share Posted July 17, 2009 nice picture, and effect. well balanced. 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spartan912 Posted July 17, 2009 Report Share Posted July 17, 2009 okay card. 7/10 Needs OCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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