ZeroLuneth Posted July 17, 2009 Report Share Posted July 17, 2009 [spoiler=Lucky Gambler][spoiler=Card Lore]You can tribute this monster to flip over cards from the top your Deck until you reach a monster that can be Normal Summoned, then activate 1 of the following effects:If the monster has 1-2 Stars flip a coin and call heads or tails, if you call it correctly Special Summon the monster.If the monster has 3-4 stars roll a die and call if the die will land on an even or odd number, if you call it right Special Summon the monster. If the monster has 5-6 stars remove from play 2 monsters from your Deck and Special Summon the monster.If the monster has 7-8 Stars remove from play the top 3 cards of your deck and Special Summon the selected monster.If the monster has 9+ Stars remove from play 1 Spell, 1 Trap, and 2 monster cards from your Deck, and Special Summon the selected monster. Then remove from play all of the other picked up cards. [spoiler=Lucky Gambler V.2][spoiler=Card Lore V.2]You can tribute this monster and 2 other monster you control to flip over cards from the top your Deck until you reach a monster that can be Normal Summoned, then activate 1 of the following effects:If the monster has 1-2 Stars flip a coin and call heads or tails, if you call it correctly Special Summon the monster.If the monster has 3-4 stars roll a six-sided die and call what number the die will land on , if you call it right Special Summon the monster. If the monster has 5-6 stars remove from play 3 spells from your Deck and Special Summon the monster.If the monster has 7-8 Stars remove from play the top 3 cards of your deck and remove from play the bottom 3 cards of your Deck, and Special Summon the selected monster.If the monster has 9+ Stars remove from play 3 Spells, 3 Trap, and 4 monster cards from your Deck, and Special Summon the selected monster. Then remove from play all of the other picked up cards. Please tell me which Version you like better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 17, 2009 Report Share Posted July 17, 2009 that is VERY weird OCG, pretty sure it's wrong but not sure what the right way is Effect is good, though I wish you didn't make it lv5. 1000 atk/def isn't going to last much 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZeroLuneth Posted July 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2009 It would be correct if I could put bullets for the multiple effects Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dweller of Parables Posted July 17, 2009 Report Share Posted July 17, 2009 Poor name for a card like that.Not a compliment, just a fact. It's like putting the name Pyromaniacin' Businessman for a Water Ninja. >_> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZeroLuneth Posted July 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2009 Poor name for a card like that.Not a compliment' date=' just a fact. It's like putting the name Pyromaniacin' Businessman for a Water Ninja. >_>[/quote'] Its name means "Lucky Gambler" there's nothing wrong with using synonyms. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dweller of Parables Posted July 17, 2009 Report Share Posted July 17, 2009 Poor name for a card like that.Not a compliment' date=' just a fact. It's like putting the name Pyromaniacin' Businessman for a Water Ninja. >_>[/quote'] Its name means "Lucky Gambler" there's nothing wrong with using synonyms. It just doesn't work for the card. =P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZeroLuneth Posted July 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2009 Poor name for a card like that.Not a compliment' date=' just a fact. It's like putting the name Pyromaniacin' Businessman for a Water Ninja. >_>[/quote'] Its name means "Lucky Gambler" there's nothing wrong with using synonyms. It just doesn't work for the card. =P other than that do you have any other comments about the card it self? (Effect, OCG, Pic) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted July 17, 2009 Report Share Posted July 17, 2009 (not to sound mean but how does Entrepreneur synonym into gambler? Entrepreneur is someone who owns their own buisness.) well the name doesnt quite fit like Dweller said. this cards effect is OP :[ its easy to skate through these effects and you should up the level some because you can summon this card straight up on your first turn and then you can use negate attack to keep it on the field then tribute it the remove cards and bam high level monster =/ atleast make it remove monsters on the field and hand and deck. Doing it from the graveyard is just to OP since their already useless to you there :[ and even with that fix its still OP. it needs some work but oh well 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZeroLuneth Posted July 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2009 OK thanks I'll work on it now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted July 17, 2009 Report Share Posted July 17, 2009 (Still a good card though :3 I'd jump someone for it! I'd be all like "gimme yo 'Fortuitous Entrepreneur' then run >>) kk ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 17, 2009 Report Share Posted July 17, 2009 there's just too little drawback, every lv gives you some sort of gain, which makes it a good effect, but unrealistic for it's OPness Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZeroLuneth Posted July 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2009 What should I change then? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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