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AkatsukiMaker

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xD

I planned on it.

Firstly, Dark Valkyria:

While this card is on the field, your opponent cannot attack other DARK monsters you control. If this card is attacked, by Tributing 1 DARK monster you control, negate the attack.

 

Problems:

You use old OCG. Lots of the wording has changed. Perhaps you should read up on that. :/

Attributes (Dark, Fire, etc) are not types. Always capitalize them.

 

Phoenix:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Phoenix Cycle". This card cannot be targeted by the effects of Spell and Trap Cards. If this card detroys a Defense Position monster, it gains 500 ATK.

 

Problems:

ATK and DEF are way too high. 2500/1700 would be much more reasonable.

The level for any realistic card is 10 at the most, but this should be around LV7.

It can't have 2 types in the brackets, but its effect can do that, i.e. "This card is also treated as a x-type."

 

Phoenix Cycle:

Tribute 1 Winged Beast- and 1 Pyro-type monster you control. Then, you can Special Summon 1 "Phoenix" from your hand or Deck.

 

Problem:

Types go "Warrior-type", etc.

Basic OCG fixes.

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