Wanderley Posted July 18, 2009 Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 [align=center]This is one of the cards of my Toy Deck what i create for X-L Prime's Fan Ficthis Set will includeRed GadgetYellow GadgetGreen Gadgetand Gadget SupportToy Soldier and some more^^[/align] Toy Box[align=center][image Credit -- NickLD]Special Summon this card as "Toy Box" (EARTH/Level 5/Machine-Type/ATK 0/DEF 2600) in Defense Position to your field. As long "Toy Box" remains face-up on the field "Toy" and Level 3 or lower Machine-Type monster cannot be select as an attack target. This card cannot be used for a Tribute Summon.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 18, 2009 Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 interesting effect, pic looks well done, OCG is fine too 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted July 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 thank you ragnarok^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lacikus Posted July 18, 2009 Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 Awesome pic effect is with tokens What I love 19/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted July 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 thank you lacikus^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 18, 2009 Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 Pic is new. Pic is exciting. Pic has potential. Card is ok. I would make the effect summon monsters, but alls good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted July 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 the idea was protecting monsters because is is a box ;)thank you liam for the nice rate^^ more comments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 18, 2009 Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 lol. Protecting is good. But I would have made it summon because it would be full of toys. And so be a recourse box and not just an immobile, harmless tank with arms. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThecrowcardMaster Posted July 18, 2009 Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 wow the pic i havent seenOCG perfectall around perfectolov lov lov 10/10 clap clap clap XDDD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Womi Posted July 18, 2009 Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 only mistakes:cannot be selectedandcannot be used. But thats the wanderley-style again, tehehehe.^^; Overall, 9.4/9.9 I'd like to see the toy set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted July 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 if you like to see my toy setlook at my 1000 card set part^^ more comments^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prince Cascade Posted July 18, 2009 Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 Few fixes:Special Summon this card as "Toy Box" (EARTH/Level 5/Machine-Type/ATK 0/DEF 2600) in Defense Position. As long "Toy Box" remains on the field, "Toy" and Level 3 or lower Machine-type monsters cannot be attacked. This card cannot be Tributed for a Tribute Summon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baragan Posted July 18, 2009 Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 interesting...9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted July 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 Few fixes:Special Summon this card as "Toy Box" (EARTH/Level 5/Machine-Type/ATK 0/DEF 2600) in Defense Position. As long "Toy Box" remains on the field' date=' "Toy" and Level 3 or lower Machine-type monsters cannot be attacked. This card cannot be Tributed for a Tribute Summon.[/quote'] you fix is very wrong -.- interesting...9/10 next time if you post one card in my thread I'll neg you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prince Cascade Posted July 18, 2009 Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 Oh? My bad. xPI'll use sources this time. How about:After activation, Special Summon this card in Defense Position (EARTH/Level 5/Machine-Type/ATK 0/DEF 2600). As long as this card is on the field, "Toy" and Level 3 or lower Machine-Type monsters you control cannot be attacked. This card cannot be Tributed for a Tribute Summon. Sources: Reason-----------------------------Metal Reflect Slime: 'Monster-Trap' activation.Arcane Archer of the Forest: "cannot be selected as an attack target" changed to "cannot be attacked"Dandylion: "cannot be used for a Tribute Summon" is "cannot be Tributed for a Tribute Summon"...as long as "Toy Box":The card is already named "Toy Box", so there's no reason in rementioning it.Face-up: Was taken out because face-down effects aren't active until the card is flipped. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted July 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 the OCG is fine now don't need more correctioneffects can write by more then one way Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
[Kagerius_XxX] Posted July 18, 2009 Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 PERFECT OCG !! very nice one !and nice pic, very nice.......9.8 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 18, 2009 Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 I still think it should summon as it contains toys. Toy shield = defencive mechanism. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted July 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 more comments please^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 sweet! everyone loves my image!!! :Dthanks for makin me do this one wanderley, i would nvr have done something like this otherwise xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peppa Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 The picture mesmerizes me...I love it 10/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted July 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 thank you all :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 The pic is awesome. The effect is very useful and fun. I can't wait to see more. :D 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted July 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 Thank you :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phanax Leminer Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 Aiku: What's in the box! I wanna see! *Look inside the Toy Box. Aiku is attacked by toys! O: It's super effective.* OCG: Perfect, but was already corrected.Effect: A rather strong Trap/Monster Card, but with the backfire of cannot be Tributed for a Tribute Summoned. Seems balance enough too. The only thing that bothers me, is that the card can become very overpowered quickly if you control all the cards that can support your field.Image and Name: I like the image and it's a refreshing image too! ^^ Overall: 8.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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