uzumakinaruto93 Posted July 18, 2009 Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 This is my first card in about... 1 1/2 years, so do I still have it or have I completly lost it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ninpo Posted July 18, 2009 Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 Nice pic.Nice simple effect.Some small OCG errors. "You can Special Summon this card from your Graveyard during your Main Phase 2 If a Monster on your side of the Field was destroyed this turn." 7/10[/i] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkhavoc Posted July 18, 2009 Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 hey welcome back i kinda new here but even i can tell that your ogc is slightly off i think you just need some capitals in certain places "Monsters" "Graveyard" and so on but i think you got it 8.9/10oh plz check out my cards http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-138490.html Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uzumakinaruto93 Posted July 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 Nice pic.Nice simple effect.Some small OCG errors. "You can Special Summon this card from your Graveyard during your Main Phase 2 If a Monster on your side of the Field was destroyed this turn." 7/10[/i] I didn't mean for it to come back only if monsters got destroyed, if they got removed from by dimensional prison or returned to the hand for some reason it should still work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ninpo Posted July 18, 2009 Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 Nice pic.Nice simple effect.Some small OCG errors. "You can Special Summon this card from your Graveyard during your Main Phase 2 If a Monster on your side of the Field was destroyed this turn." 7/10[/i] I didn't mean for it to come back only if monsters got destroyed' date=' if they got removed from by dimensional prison or returned to the hand for some reason it should still work[/quote'] Ok, how about. "You can Special Summon this card from your Graveyard during your Main Phase 2 If a Monster you control was removed from the Field this turn." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uzumakinaruto93 Posted July 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 OGC updated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 18, 2009 Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 OCG looks fine now, though effect is still somewhat too simple and dull 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uzumakinaruto93 Posted July 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 OCG looks fine now' date=' though effect is still somewhat too simple and dull 8/10[/quote'] kinda agree with you there, though if I change the effect now it wont really be the same. So if I make another card ill try with a little more complex effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted July 18, 2009 Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 It's a great idea and very useful. But to me it seems a little plain. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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