Lightningazn Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 [align=center]THIS IS MY FIRST SET OF CARDS I DESIGN MYSELFTHE CELESTIAL CARDS!!!!!![/align][align=center]I got all my images from Google and edited them myselfAnd they all have the same theme of the color blue, wind atrribute and the Celestial Background along with my Celestial SymbolAll the effects deal with cards being removed from playAnd there ATK and DEF end with 50 not 00 (ex. ATK/1850 DEF/2150)[/align] [spoiler=[color=#00BFFF]Booster Packs (2)[/color]][spoiler=[color=#00BFFF]Booster Packs (2)[/color]] [align=center][spoiler=[color=#00BFFF]Decks (1)[/color]] [/align] [align=center][spoiler=[size=large]Special Card Versions (0)[/size]] [/align] [spoiler=[color=#1E90FF]Celestial Beginning[/color]][spoiler=[color=#1E90FF]Monster Cards (13)[/color]][spoiler=[color=#1E90FF]Monster Cards (13)[/color]] [spoiler=[color=#87CEEB]Spell/Trap Cards (7)[/color]][spoiler=[color=#87CEEB]Spell/Trap Cards (7)[/color]] [spoiler=[color=#1E90FF]Celestial Fulfillment[/color]]Credit For The Celestial Beast goes to Hyper Super ShadicCredit for The Celestial Immortal - Zeru & Sword of the Celestial goes to LuciferCredit for Winged Celestial Knight, Celestial Wings, & Celestial Canon goes to Anonymous [align=center][spoiler=[color=#1E90FF]Monster Cards (6)[/color]][spoiler=Celestial Immortal - Zeru Lore]"The Celestial Being" + 1 "Celestial" monster.This card is also treated as a Fairy-Type monster. When this card is Summoned, by removing 5 or more "Celestial" monsters from your deck, hand, or field from play, this card cannot be effected by Spell, Trap, or Monster Effects for the remainder of the duel. This effect can be used only once per duel. Increase the ATK and DEF of this card by x500 for every "Celestial" monster removed from play and in your Graveyard. During your Main Phase, you can Special Summon 1 "Celestial" monster to your opponent's side of the field in face-up ATK Position. That monster's ATK is reduced to 0 is removed from play at the end of the Battle Phase. This monster cannot be destroyed except by the effect or attack of a "Celestial" monster. As long as this card remains on the field, both you and your opponent can attack only once. [spoiler=Celestial Lightning Dragon Card Lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Celestial Lightning". When this card attacks, place 1 Celestial Counter on this card (max. 8.), then activate one of the following effects:• Remove 1 Celestial Counter from this card to select 1 card removed from play and add it to your hand.• Remove 3 Celestial Counters from this card to Special Summon 1 removed from play monster.• Remove 5 Celestial Counters from this card to negate the activation of a Spell Card / Trap Card / Normal Summon / Flip Summon / Special Summon and remove from play the Spell Card, Trap Card, or Summoned monster. [/align] [align=center][spoiler=[color=#87CEEB]Spell/Trap Cards (4)[/color]] [/align] [align=center]________________________________________________________________________________IF YOU HAVE ANY IDEAS/SUGGESTIONS THAT COULD MAKE THE CARDS BETTER OR WHAT CARDSI SHOULD MAKE, TELL ME________________________________________________________________________________[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McLovin2132 Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 Haha, the "Celestial Ninja" is "Ryu Hayabusa," lol but good cards :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 There are quite a few OCG errors (mostly minor), but overall well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 Celestial Knight and Ninja have too simple effect, but for the most part they're well done 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Assclown Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 There are quite a few OCG errors (mostly minor)' date=' but overall well done.[/quote'] There's also some on the OP'd side Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lightningazn Posted July 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 There are quite a few OCG errors (mostly minor)' date=' but overall well done.[/quote'] what were the errors? ill fix itThere are quite a few OCG errors (mostly minor)' date=' but overall well done.[/quote'] There's also some on the OP'd side what is OP'd? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 There are quite a few OCG errors (mostly minor)' date=' but overall well done.[/quote'] what were the errors? ill fix itThere are quite a few OCG errors (mostly minor)' date=' but overall well done.[/quote'] There's also some on the OP'd side what is OP'd? OP'd is short hand for Overpowered. ie some of these cards have unfair ATK gains or too powerful effects. I'll point them out, along with the OCG fixed effects. Celestial Dragon Once per turn, during your Main Phase, Special Summon 1 removed from play monster in Attack Position. Overpowered. Reason: Too low-leveled. Fix: Increase to Lv.7 Celestial Dragon Knight "Celestial Dragon" + "Celestial Knight"This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summon. This card gains 500 ATK for each removed from play monster. Overpowered. Reason: Too much ATK gain. Fix: Increase to Lv.9 and reduce ATK gain to 300. Celestial Knight Monsters this card destroys by battle are removed from play instead of going to the Graveyard. Overpowered. Reason: Too much ATK and DEF. Fix: Either increase to Lv.6 or reduce ATK/DEF to 1250/1550. Celestial Magician When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, remove from play 1 Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls. Overpowered. Reason: Too much ATK and DEF. Fix: Increase to Lv.6. Celestial Ninja FLIP: Remove from play 1 card on the field. Overpowered. Reason: Too much ATK and DEF. Fix: Increase to Lv.5. Celestial Warrior When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, your opponent removes from play 1 card in their hand. Overpowered. Reason: Too much ATK and DEF. Fix: Increase to Lv.7. Celestial Knight (Light Armor Mode) This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Celestial Armor". When this card is Special Summoned successfully, remove from play 1 card on the field. Celestial Calling Ritual '...whose total Level Stars equal...' = '...whose total Levels equal...' Celestial Armor I would change this card to an Equip Spell Card with the following effect. Equip only to "Celestial Knight". The equipped monster gains 400 ATK and DEF. During your Main Phase, you can Tribute this card and the equipped monster. If you do, Special Summon 1 "Celestial Knight (Light Armor Mode)" from your hand, Deck or Graveyard. Celestial Dimension All "Celestial" monsters gain 700 ATK. All non-"Celestial" monsters lose 300 DEF. Quite a dull effect overall. Add a few more bits to it. PM me for extra help if you wish.You may want to join the Newb Defense League. Check the link in my sig. \/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lightningazn Posted July 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Mousy Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 Can you contribute the Dimension picture for Voltaic's Picture Xchange? Just click on the picture in my sig to go there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lightningazn Posted July 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 Can you contribute the Dimension picture for Voltaic's Picture Xchange? Just click on the picture in my sig to go there. what are you talking about? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Mousy Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 Click the thing on my sig that says Voltaic's Picture Xchg... you will see. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lightningazn Posted July 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 Click the thing on my sig that says Voltaic's Picture Xchg... you will see. no thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lightningazn Posted July 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 UPDATED!!! OCG ERRORS FIXED!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lightningazn Posted July 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 UPDATED 2 NEW CARDS ADDED PLEASE COMMENT AND RATE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 the new cards look well balanced, pics are perfect, so this time I'll rate them 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lightningazn Posted July 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 thank you i tried to make them more realistic2 MORE CARDS ADDED Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lightningazn Posted July 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 ANOTHER CARD ADDED Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 looks just like all your other cards, balanced, OCG well done, pics awesome 9.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lightningazn Posted July 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 thank you once again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lightningazn Posted July 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 25, 2009 UPDATED!!! 4 NEW CARDS ADDED (INCLUDING A SYNCHRO, DARK SYNCHRO, AND DARK TUNER) WITH A BOOSTER UPDATE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted July 25, 2009 Report Share Posted July 25, 2009 They look good. These are very creative and interesting. I like them. please continue. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lightningazn Posted July 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 25, 2009 They look good. These are very creative and interesting. I like them. please continue. 9/10 thank you..i dont understand this but someone earlier said they sucked and rated them 3.4/10 :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axel Posted July 25, 2009 Report Share Posted July 25, 2009 i love your celestial cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lightningazn Posted July 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 25, 2009 i love your celestial cards thank youi design them my self from pics i find from google and then edit them and add my own lil touch to them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axel Posted July 25, 2009 Report Share Posted July 25, 2009 sweet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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