Limited Edition KING Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 "Doom's End Warrior" + 1 or more non-tuner monsters. This card gains 300 ATK for each "Doom's End" monster in either players Graveyard. Once per turn, you can remove 1 "Doom's End" monster from your Graveyard to discard 1 card from your opponents hand. If thier are any OCG errors plz note them in your post i dont wont you to say that "there are a few OCG errors in the card" unless you write what they are. Thank you and enjoy =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 A simple effect. People like em longer, but I respect it. It's a common one."Increase the ATK of this card by 300 for each "Doom's End" monster in either player's Graveyard."ATK -> 2400 (Since it'd probably be used in a "Doom's End" Deck obviously.)DEF -> 2700 (Just a slight change. It'll feel a little more comfortable.)Lose the parentheses. It should say..."Doom's End Warrior" + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 effect somewhat on the simple end With the 300 atk gain already, raise the lv to 9 if you want to keep it at 2600 atk 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 well it's better, so I'll raise the rating up to 7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 Fix the text. It shouldn't be next to the Summoning Conditions like that. Anyway, way better. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 Perfect. 9.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Assclown Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 U could just post the card in the first post using edit....... The card is very simple and somewhat common....common isn't (in my eyes) good. The card needs more uniqueness. 6.7 / 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Assclown Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 Perfect. 9.4/10Thx but if its perfect why did you give it 9.4? you could have just gave a 10 or 9.5 but thx for the help with the card =) Just because he said "Perfect" doesnt mean its 10/10........perfect doesnt always mean.... u kno......perfect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 mhm...not perfect OCG fix: "Doom's End Warrior" + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters. This card gains 300 ATK for each "Doom's End" monster in either players Graveyard. Once per turn, you can remove 1 "Doom's End" monster from your Graveyard to discard 1 card from your opponents hand. i think i don't like the card :( 6.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 edit your first post please -.- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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