DarkSleep Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 this is my first card here.lol.wat do u think of it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 I'm not sure decreasing the original atk of the card by 400 is smart, it'll be too weak to atk that way. Might want to remove that effect. Also the discarding 1 card to draw one card's effect is relatively balanced out, though it certainly can be abused 7.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 The effect is kind of off-topic at the end. Get rid of the drawing effect. I like the beginning effect though. It's pretty good for a first card. Gotta give you your props. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkSleep Posted July 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 thanks, hmm. i guess it is too weak anyway.i'll try to make a new card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Incognito:. Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 Well, if this is your first card its awesome. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Assclown Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 The effect is kind of off-topic at the end. Get rid of the drawing effect. I like the beginning effect though. It's pretty good for a first card. Gotta give you your props. 8/10 Yea........ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Limited Edition KING Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 try making the effect like this. Once per turn you can discard 1 card to draw 1 card. When this card attacks the original ATK increases by 400, When this card is attacked decrease the original ATK by 400.So try making it like steamroid with the draw/discard effect. =) So i'll give you a 9/10 for a 1st card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ihop Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 Not bad for a 1st card.Pic is good, and effect is mostly good.OCG seems pretty good, but may be a bit UP.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dweller of Parables Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 lolPlay MTG and find out what art is. XD /lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hero2die Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 Wowthis Card is exellent^^ Pic 9/10Effect 7.8 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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