chizuruotohime Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 enjoy~!!! Comment and rate~!! [align=center]http://i220.photobucket.com/albums/dd79/otohimechizuru/cardedge-1.jpg' alt='cardedge-1.jpg'>[/align] [spoiler=Effect]During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. During each of your Main Phases, destroy 1 card your opponent controls. If you do, this card cannot declare an attack during your Battle Phase. If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, during your next Standby Phase, you can remove from play 1 Warrior-Type monster in your Graveyard to Special Summon this card in Attack Position. [spoiler=Effect]This card is used to Ritual Summon "Phoenixcaster Alessa". You must also Tribute monsters whose total Levels equal 10 or more from the field or your hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Assclown Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 The first card has confusing effect, "Once per turn, discard 1 card from your hand and remove it from play to negate all card effects that you discarded until the End Phase". I dont get it. 2nd card has bad pic. 7 / 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted July 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 example, I discarded a Spell Card , then all spell cards in this turn are negated...got it?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Assclown Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 oh.........thats cool :D I change my rating 8.5 / 10 Update - Use this for the 2nd card's pic.......? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 card looks balanced enough, 2nd pic could be slightly better 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lacikus Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 9/10 Very good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted July 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 @halo ring thanks for the clearance @ ragnarok 1945 good. i thought It was overpowered~!!@lackius thanks a million~~!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 I'm still having a hard to judge if it's OPed or not. I'll get back to you when I made a decision Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 These are really quite nice. Phoenixcaster Alessa OCG: This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card "Forbidden Flames". Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, you can remove from play 1 Spell or Trap Card in your hand. If you do, negate the effects of all face-up Spell or Trap Cards, until your End Phase. If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, during your next Standby Phase, you can remove from play monster(s) in your Graveyard whose total Level Stars equal 10 or more. If you do, Special Summon this card in Attack Position. Gunslasher Erika (Gotta love the gunswords...) During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. During each of your End Phases, destroy 1 card your opponent controls. If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, during your next Standby Phase, you can remove from play 1 Warrior-Type monster in your Graveyard. If you do, Special Summon this card in Attack Position. Now, I think this card is overpowered, since it can destroy 2 cards per turn. Perhaps you could change it to an effect that allows you to destroy 1 or 2 face-down card(s) or attack, not both. Forbidden Flames Perfect. Use Halo Ring's pic. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted July 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 @max darkness Thanks for the explanation....Although I planned for Alessa to discard a card type. Not only spell or trap , monster card as well. Hmm.......as of gunslasher, maybe I'll change a bit... When u activate her effect that destroys a card, gunslasher cannot conduct a battle...Is that balanced to u?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 I like them. I must agree with Max darkness though. The gunslasher is slightly OP'd. I would change it so it can't attack the turn you activate the effect. Use halo ring's pic it's cooler. (No offense). 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 @max darkness Thanks for the explanation....Although I planned for Alessa to discard a card type. Not only spell or trap ' date=' monster card as well. Hmm.......as of gunslasher, maybe I'll change a bit... When u activate her effect that destroys a card, gunslasher cannot conduct a battle...Is that balanced to u??[/quote'] Very well. Modified OCG fix below. Phoenixcaster Alessa This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card "Forbidden Flames". Once per turn, while this card is face-up on the field, if a Spell, Trap, or Effect Monster targets this card, you can remove from play the same type of card to negate the effects of the same types of card until your End Phase. If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, during your next Standby Phase, you can remove from play monster(s) in your Graveyard whose total Levels equal 10 or more. If you do, Special Summon this card in Attack Position. As for Gunslasher, your idea is balanced. OCG for that effect:During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. During each of your Main Phases, destroy 1 card your opponent controls. If you do, this card cannot declare an attack during your Battle Phase. If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, during your next Standby Phase, you can remove from play 1 Warrior-Type monster in your Graveyard. If you do, Special Summon this card in Attack Position. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted July 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 okie dokie`!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 Sorry but OCG fixes for Phoenixcaster have not been entirely correct so far...let me take a crack at it: This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Forbiddden Flames". You must also Tribute monsters whose total Level Stars equal 10 or more from the field or your hand. Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 card in your hand. If you do, the effects of all cards on the field of the same type (Monster, Spell, or Trap) as the removed card are negated until the End Phase. During the Standby Phase of the turn after this card was destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can remove from play monsters in your Graveyard whose total Level Stars equal 10, and Special Summon ths card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ookami Moriyama Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 nice card chizuru ^_^ I like 'em a lot 9.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 Quite nice. The effects were corrected by Max. 9/10 =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted July 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 thanks for all of your support guys~~! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted July 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 OK Effects revised~!!!! Thanks a million~~~!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peppa Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 I really like Phoenixcaster's effect. It's intuitive... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 now the effect revised I'll boost the rate to 9.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted July 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 WOW~!!! thanks a million Ragnarok 1945~!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 hey, it's only a small increase. I thought your cards were fine the way they were, but since you felt there was room for improvement, I had to raise my judgment too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
master dartz2 Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 gr8 cards.love the pics lol 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted July 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 Thanks master dartz! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted July 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 Sorry but OCG fixes for Phoenixcaster have not been entirely correct so far...let me take a crack at it: This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card' date=' "Forbiddden Flames". [b']You must also Tribute monsters whose total Level Stars equal 10 or more from the field or your hand.[/b] Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 card in your hand. If you do, the effects of all cards on the field of the same type (Monster, Spell, or Trap) as the removed card are negated until the End Phase. During the Standby Phase of the turn after this card was destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can remove from play monsters in your Graveyard whose total Level Stars equal 10, and Special Summon ths card. At the first text, you dont have to write this down since it is written on the ritual spell card. The second text, on the field?? Is that mean Alessa is included when u remove from play a monster card? I just edited her effect again...and this time this is it~~!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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