AfterBurner™ Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 Well here it is!!Please this is my first ever card made using the card maker. So my OCG might be a bit off. But i will accept critism within reasonthanks, view, comment and rate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McLovin2132 Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 [align=center]Ok, I'm not going to judge you, I'm just going to give you some help:1. this is good for your first card, kudos :D2. correct OCG (which stands for "Official Card Grammer"):When you control this face-down card, if you control no other cards, apply 1 of the following effects:-inflict 800 damage to your opponent-place this card in your Deck, shuffle it, and draw 2 cardsSo, good luck :D[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AfterBurner™ Posted July 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 Thanks alot i'll edit the card now reli thanks for your help it's reli appreciated :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yami_Yondaime Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 fix ocg but good for a first, 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McLovin2132 Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 [align=center]Thanks alot i'll edit the card now reli thanks for your help it's reli appreciated :) Hey your welcome and no problem' date=' and now that it's fixed, I can rate it :D well I give it an 8/10 :D good work :D[/align'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The D.M. Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 not bad not bad at all for a 1st timer 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rideouter Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 7.9/10! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AfterBurner™ Posted July 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 wow a average of 7.1/10 after 16 mins thats good i think lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 really good for your first card 8.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lost Soul Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 Dang this is a good 1st card. I wont judge but i will tell you some terms.Op'ed = OverpoweredOCG = Official Card GrammerOGC = Official Game CardPM = post Message, and that is just a messageIf you need to know any terms, pm me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 OCG fix: When you only control this face-down card, select 1 of the following effects-- inflict 800 damage to your opponent--return this card to your Deck, draw 2 cards mhm... for the first card not bad but a kind of OP [overpowered] because Pot of greed was banned for its effect and this card is a better version of it niche work for first6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 not very good effect, but for a first I'll give it 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Assclown Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 not very good effect' date=' but for a first I'll give it 7/10[/quote'] ^^ Yea, what he said Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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