Dan.Baker123 Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 [align=center]Hey there guys!!! I've been on this site for a while, but before today I was always a guest. But today I made a profile and this is my first card, which will also be my member card. So enjoy the card and remember to rate, comment and anything else you do :D Dan.Baker123 DARK **** Warrior/Effect When this card is Summoned, flip a coin. If the result is heads, this card is unaffected by the effects of Spell and Trap Cards. If the result is tails, destroy this card. When this card battles another monster, roll a 6-sided die. If the result is 1 or 6, during damage calculation only, increase the ATK of this card by the original ATK of the opponent's monster. If the result is 2 or 5, you can discard 2 cards to switch the ATK and DEF of this card until the End Phase of your turn. If the result is 3 or 4, you can return both monsters to their owners' hands at the start of the Damage Step (without damage calculation). This card is also treated as a Machine-Type monster. This card inflicts Piercing Damage. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard as a result of battle, you can Special Summon it during the End Phase of your next turn. ATK/100 DEF/1900 87456697 2009 Dan Baker Image: http://www.archipictor.com/pics/covers_lotus.jpg [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 pic is REALLY bad, def is WAY too high 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain Lawless Posted July 19, 2009 Report Share Posted July 19, 2009 Concept and picture are originalBut it's way too overpowered. It's effect will usually pwn the opponent unless you dont have 2 to discardand happen to roll that, he has a S/T invuln effect, and is resummoned when destroyed. Tweak the effect, maybe take out the Recursion and power down the Dice rolls. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dan.Baker123 Posted July 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 Alrighty, I fixed the card, well really I just lowered it's DEF to 1900 instead of 2900 and I got rid of that horrible holo too, lol, so how is it now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 pic is still pretty bad, effect still isn't impressive I'll only raise the rating up to 3.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dan.Baker123 Posted July 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 pic is still pretty bad' date=' effect still isn't impressive I'll only raise the rating up to 3.5/10[/quote'] Ok...? I don't get what's wrong with either one, what am I missing? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 I'd change the name and picture COMPLETELY Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dan.Baker123 Posted July 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 I'd change the name and picture COMPLETELY Well the name is like that because it's supposed to be my own member card, didn't you read it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 obviously, but the name and picture aren't appealing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dan.Baker123 Posted July 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 obviously' date=' but the name and picture aren't appealing.[/quote'] Ugh, whatever, I'm keeping the name, that's for sure, but maybe, just maybe, I'll try to find a better image. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 fine, you get a better pic, I'll raise the rating higher Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dan.Baker123 Posted July 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 fine' date=' you get a better pic, I'll raise the rating higher[/quote'] Ok, I'll look, I don't know how long it'll take me, but I'll look. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 thanks, I appreciate it greatly if you could find a better pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dan.Baker123 Posted July 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 Ok, I found a new, "better" image, so how about now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 now it's far more suited and I'll raise the rating to 5.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gerg174 Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 Pic is okay but the effect is way over the top. 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dan.Baker123 Posted July 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 now it's far more suited and I'll raise the rating to 5.5/10 Oh yeah, because that's such a great improvement, thanks anyways I guess. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain Lawless Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 Well, although you changed the pic and everything, there is no effect change, still as godly as before :PJust work on that, for now it's only about a 4.5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dan.Baker123 Posted July 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 Well' date=' although you changed the pic and everything, there is no effect change, still as godly as before :P[*']Just work on that, for now it's only about a 4.5 Ok, but can I ask, what exactly is wrong with the effect? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lotticus Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 Maybe get rid of the heads n tails? or like have it destoryed with tials or sothing i dunno. Die idea is great. Bloody hard to read though lawl. oh and light type, but dark looking pic? if it as me i'd change it to a dark type, but its your card =] kep up the good work lol6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dan.Baker123 Posted July 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 Maybe get rid of the heads n tails? or like have it destoryed with tials or sothing i dunno. Die idea is great. Bloody hard to read though lawl. oh and light type' date=' but dark looking pic? if it as me i'd change it to a dark type, but its your card ='] kep up the good work lol6.5/10 That's a good idea for the heads and tails flip :D I'm going to change that right now, thanks, and yeah it should be a DARK. EDIT: It is now a DARK monster with a slightly different effect, it now has a downside :D sort of, I think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lotticus Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 Maybe get rid of the heads n tails? or like have it destoryed with tials or sothing i dunno. Die idea is great. Bloody hard to read though lawl. oh and light type' date=' but dark looking pic? if it as me i'd change it to a dark type, but its your card ='] kep up the good work lol6.5/10 That's a good idea for the heads and tails flip :D I'm going to change that right now, thanks, and yeah it should be a dark. Edit: It is now a DARK monster with a slightly different effect, it now has a downside :D sort of, I think Now thats a YUGIOH card i would want in my deck. I'd say thats balanced down to the q-tee now. AND someone took my advice?!?!? things are looking up lolgreat work dude 9/10 =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dan.Baker123 Posted July 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 Maybe get rid of the heads n tails? or like have it destoryed with tials or sothing i dunno. Die idea is great. Bloody hard to read though lawl. oh and light type' date=' but dark looking pic? if it as me i'd change it to a dark type, but its your card ='] kep up the good work lol6.5/10 That's a good idea for the heads and tails flip :D I'm going to change that right now, thanks, and yeah it should be a dark. Edit: It is now a DARK monster with a slightly different effect, it now has a downside :D sort of, I think Now thats a YUGIOH card i would want in my deck. I'd say thats balanced down to the q-tee now. AND someone took my advice?!?!? things are looking up lolgreat work dude 9/10 =] Hey, thanks, and I'm glad I took your advice, tell you what, hows about a REP :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain Lawless Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 That makes it a whole lot more balanced. The Battle thing at the end levelled it out.8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dan.Baker123 Posted July 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 That makes it a whole lot more balanced. The Battle thing at the end levelled it out.8.5/10 Thanks :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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