check my first cards

[tonyfight]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I hope u like it guys and give me ur opinions

[Rehva]

No Links and Thumbnails.

 

Click on your card in the card maker and a link will apear.

[Rehva]

no Attachments .

 

Step 1 Open Up a card on your card maker.

Step 2 Click on the card.

Step 3 a Link will be Under it.

Step 4 Copy and Paste it on a New Thread or Edit This one.

Step 5 ALL DONE!

[ragnarok1945]

2 cards need effects

 

all the effect cards have too simple effects

 

6.5/10

[Rehva]

Now My Rate. 7/10. Some Card's Need Effects.

[♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥]

some cards need effects. two pics are blurry. your third cards name doesnt fit at all. card 3 is OP. and its effect is hard to read due to improper wording and bad OCG. Nuclear explosion would be banned if it were real. its effect is OP. Warrior armor either needs to be made a field spell or you need to change it to effect only 1 warrior monster. your last card is also OP. lower its attack to atleast 1400.

 

Overall you have very bad OCG and wording is terrible. alot of these are OP. the top 2 need effects and new pics their blurry. card three needs a new name. and read the above for further reasons as to why you recieve the rate

 

3.5/10

[ATG3192]

I agree with every post above.

 

I don't mind card #1, could use a more anime-ish looking pic but I guess it's alright. I'm not a stickler for having ONLY EFFECT MONSTERS!!! so I appreciate your attempts at normal monsters. The lore for the first card should be longer.

 

Card #2's pic isn't blurry, it's too squished to really tell wtf it is. Make the lvl 9 or 10, 3200 is too strong for lvl. 8 in my opinion.

 

Card #3...yeah the name doesn't make sense with the pic and it's too OP. You should change the pic or name and lower his attack, or increase his level.

 

Card #4 should destroy all CARDS, not just monsters, on the field.

 

Card #5 I personally think should be a quick-play

 

Card #7 should not only take life points, but it has an ATK of 1900 then you should half the attack if it attacks the opponent's life points directly.

 

All cards need some better images, the OCG on every card is, honestly, awful. My advice for you is to find some yugioh cards you have lying around and pretty much copy the wording if an effect for a monster is on a basic concept like inflicting battle damage based on difference between an attacking ATK and a defending DEF.

 

Overall, I'd have to say a 3.5/10.

[General Assclown]

some cards need effects. two pics are blurry. your third cards name doesnt fit at all. card 3 is OP. and its effect is hard to read due to improper wording and bad OCG. Nuclear explosion would be banned if it were real. its effect is OP. Warrior armor either needs to be made a field spell or you need to change it to effect only 1 warrior monster. your last card is also OP. lower its attack to atleast 1400.

 

Overall you have very bad OCG and wording is terrible. alot of these are OP. the top 2 need effects and new pics their blurry. card three needs a new name. and read the above for further reasons as to why you recieve the rate

 

3.5/10

 

^ What she said

 

 

Also, why'd u have to find really good pics and wreck them like that?

 

The cards are quite noob-ish but u can't be blamed.....we were all like that once.

 

4 / 10

[ragnarok1945]

yeah but the pictures compensate for it, not sure where you got the pics though

[General Assclown]

.....what?.......