Scorned Set, Beta - Rate and Comment

[Mintcookie]

[ragnarok1945]

Skylox's pic looks a little weird

 

Fire Imp, Sky Warrior, Gift of the Bloody Witch have too simple effects

 

8/10

[Peppa]

Very nice overall! I like the second card's picture! The very first card's OCG was a bit off I think. "In addition" should be the start of a new sentence. Overall nice pics, but some were too realistic (hitonama, heat protection.) Also, the mask magic card was UP'ed! For that devastating of an effect of removing 5 cards from your deck from play it every turn it should be atleast 2000 ATK increase!

[Mintcookie]

Agreed, however you could equip it to your opponent's monster, that was the ideal of the card when i made it I need to fix the ocg so it sais "the controller" etc.. Thank you for the comment.

 

Very nice overall! I like the second card's picture! The very first card's OCG was a bit off I think. "In addition" should be the start of a new sentence. Overall nice pics' date=' but some were too realistic (hitonama, heat protection.) Also, the mask magic card was UP'ed! For that devastating of an effect of removing 5 cards from your deck from play it every turn it should be atleast 2000 ATK increase!

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[Peppa]

Then make it say "The controller of the card" because right now it says "your deck." In that case, this card is pretty mighty powerful. May I suggest then having your opponent pay 2000 LP to destroy the card during a standby phase?