Mintcookie Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 pics are all very good, but Maiden of the Ocean, Mermaid of Grace have too simple effects 9.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Choke Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 All pics are good, but your OCG needs alot alot of work. Capitalizing is the biggest issue. It's "Standby Phase" not "stand by phase". Uhmm, "Special Summon" should be capitalized. "face-down position" > "Defense Position. Capitalize "Deck", "Graveyard", "Summon", "Tribute", "Equip Spell Card", "Life Points", "Set", "Spell Cards" - not "magic". Anyways, it's pretty good, follow up on what ragna said. 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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