I Made This Half Asleep Lol

[AfterBurner™]

OCG is reli bad in this one i think

Lore

You can special summon this card from your hand when you take direct damage from one of your opponents monsters, this monster's ATK is equal to the amount of damage you took. When this monster attacks a monster that is summoned by using two tributes you can destroy this monster and return the two monsters that were tributed to your side of the field.

[ragnarok1945]

pic looks pretty good

 

I think you were supposed to say When one of your opponent's monsters attacks you Life Points directly, special summon this card from your hand.

 

 

Interesting effect, though I'm not sure it's a good idea to have it at lv8. Since you said the atk would only be equal to the damage done by ONE of your opponent's monsters, not sure how high than can go.

 

May want to drop it down to lv6

 

7/10

[AfterBurner™]

yh i see your point will edit soon

[LiAM]

I can make better in my sleep [/cruelandoffensivebutdidntmean]

 

Pic is overused.

 

It's only 1 ? for the ATK or DEF.

 

Cos otherwise the ATK would be like 2837 -and that's impossible.

 

X000 is for DIVINE monsters, ? is for ordinary monsters.

 

OCG errors, remember that numbers become the numeric symbol and not the word (i.e. one = 1).

 

'Your side of the field' is old OCG, it's simple 'you control'. (Same applies to opponent ('your opponent controls')).

 

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Key words are capitalized, words that involve actions in the game or name a part of the game;

Deck

Graveyard

Tribute

Spell Card

Trap Card

 

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there are exceptions though, like;

field

hand

destroy

monster card

return

 

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There's a lot more stuff to go through, but that's just basics.

[Blue Eyes Farting Dragon]

rally liked this card... mybe a lil lower level else way good 8/10