Catman25 Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 A card I made for a contest. Felt like sharing. [spoiler=Effect]This card cannot be destroyed in battle, except by LIGHT monsters. When this card inflicts battle damage, return all face-down cards on the field to the top of their respective decks. The decks are then shuffled. When this card destroys a monster you take damage equal to the destroyed monster's DEF. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 in = by (in the first sentence)battle damage = Battle Damage decks = Decks Not bad card, I like the image and the name, the OCG is decent, and the effect is good. The last effect is kind of harsh, maybe change it to half the destroyed monsters defense. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 I'm surprised you put Flame into the card name, and yet have it as DARK attribute and not FIRE. Last effect is going to be a nasty burn on you, that might be too much, you should have just said you'll take 1000 pts of damage or something 7.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 The 'respective Decks' could be 'owners'. by battle - like said above. And also as Ragnarok pointed out, the 'Flame' for DARK, it's not even Pyro. And it looks more Reptile than Fiend. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 actually you could have just said this card's attribute is also treated as FIRE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 I still think it should be Reptile Type and FIRE attribute. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 This card is a bit more of the underpowered side, only because of the last effect. And that picture is of Diablo, from Diablo 2. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Octobeam Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 This card would go very well against a Zombie Counterpart deck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted July 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 I'm surprised you put Flame into the card name' date=' and yet have it as DARK attribute and not FIRE.[/b']Last effect is going to be a nasty burn on you, that might be too much, you should have just said you'll take 1000 pts of damage or something 7.8/10I thought of that too, but it looked more Dark. :neutral: Thanks for comments. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuro no Keiyakushu Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 8/10 and you should change the last effect to "half the DEF" as the damage you take Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Austinspencerman Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 Ugh...As if there ain't enough Ha Des's.Interesting ability, though...I'm gonna say 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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