Cardmaker1666 Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 This card just came to me when i saw the pic, so leave comments, and if i have anything wrong, leave fix. Effect:If this card is successfuly activated, you draw 1 card. -If Monster Card Drawn: It is summoned to your side of the field in Attack Position, regardless of summoning conditions.-If Spell Card Drawn: You and your opponent draw 10 cards and summon any level 5 or lower monsters to the field in defensive position and set any spell cards on the field. Any left over cards are removed from play.-If Trap Card Drawn: You and your opponent both lose Life Points eqaul to the number of cards on the field x200. Better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 You didn't state what the spell card targets. You just said three different things. Is this meant to be a chain to another card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bribri123123 Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 You need to explain effect more clearly... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 Expand on the effect, if you don't explain it well people wont understand it. Fix OCG as well. one = 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 effect not very clear, minor OCG errors 5/10 for now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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