bighope Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 A long time ago, before the area of humans, their were energy beings and these energy beings were ruled by the two halves of a hole that was used to bring into existence humans, to live and worship them. These two halves were Malevolence and Radiance. This strong power was coveted by the humans that thirsted for the power of the "Hole". Their strive for this power was so great that they went to sealing and destroying the energy beings in order to reach the Hole. What was left of the creatures developed a new kind of power that involved shedding their own power to leave the dimension, but what they didn’t know was that some of the worshipers hid some of the energy beings seals away in order to preserve their religion. But time has a way with memory and it ate away at the religion until it was nothing but a forgotten memory to the ages. Today we have no idea of the power that lies under our feet, and what we don’t know is that the Hole was obtained by the worshipers and hidden thousands of feet below the earths crust. It is the reason that we all live. Some people still look for this power, yet they don’t know what it is or why it is hear or how it got hear, but the lust for this power has been burned onto our DNA and it will spike at the moment of truth. _____________________________________________________________ http://www.bebo.com/Profile.jsp?MemberId=6846807445 http://img188.imageshack.us/img188/2209/220623q.jpg' alt='220623q.jpg'> image credit link: http://media.photobucket.com/image/anime%20dark%20portal/fireflyofearth/Anime%20Girls/anime_dark_fav42.jpg Ya thats right Dark Vortex is a Monster Card i maid it the choise of the oponent weather they want to fight the monster and unleashe this unstopable force. Or did I? http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/3350/220623.jpg' alt='220623.jpg'>[/center][/center] image credit link: http://www.fairiesvampires.com/ [align=center]http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/6729/220623a.jpg' alt='220623a.jpg'> If this monster is attacked wile in face down defense position you can decrease this monsters attack and defense to 0 to end the battle phase.[/align] image credit link: http://media.photobucket.com/image/anime%20mechanical%20monster/lokiandco/anime_girl--large-msg-117097817952.jpg _____________________________________________________________ http://img31.imageshack.us/img31/5757/220623r.jpg' alt='220623r.jpg'> When a monster with “Malevolent” in its card name you control changes stats you can put one Malice counter on this card. You can Special Summon a monster with "Malevolent" in its card name from either player’s Graveyard by removing counters from this card equal to its lvl. If a card is to be removed from play you can return it to the owner’s deck instead.[/align] image credit link:dragonballmovieforum.com/showthread.php?p=10207 _____________________________________________________________ When your opponent activates a Spell or Trap card you must activate this card. Destroy all of the monsters with "Malevolent" in its card name on the field and take the difference of its summoned original stats with its final stats and Decrease it from both player’s Life Points. image credit link: http://www.epilogue.net/cgi/database/art/view.pl?id=92658 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 I dislike instant win cards, and technically decreasing it by 10,000 wouldn't take very long either 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bighope Posted July 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 I dont like instant win monsters too, so i maid it very dificlt and worth it to summon this monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
coolmoo Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 wtf is wrong with this ocg >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bighope Posted July 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 well just dont complain about it tell me whats wrong with it. (sniff) you make me sad <=( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 Remove the instant win effect for starters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.GhostRyder Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 WTH is up with the 10,000. and 2nd it would be fobbidon anyways. No rate/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bighope Posted July 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 Their =) i did what you said and took away the instant win effect and changed it to something better. (Because it is less cheap) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.GhostRyder Posted July 20, 2009 Report Share Posted July 20, 2009 1st card i give 7.4/102nd no rate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bighope Posted July 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 I've got much more portal monsters ready, i just want to expose them slowly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 I came here expecting to see Portal cards based off the Orangebox game 'portal' (the one with the portal gun and you can go through the holes). These are good, but insta-win cards are only ok if you suffer a huge loss and/ or it's really hard to use. EDIT: And it's 'Damned' not 'Dammed'. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bighope Posted July 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 um, i changed the effect and i'm shur its not an instant win card anymoreeven befor you toled me so Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 I stayed on this thread for a while but forgot to post for ages. So like, I didn't see the change o.O And can't you remove the /Effect part and just leave it as /Portal? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bighope Posted July 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 Thats ok, and i cant just make it portal monsters, sarry What would you rait them as Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 also change the type. Portal is not a real type, though your next two pics are good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 I got bored of rating cards - So now I turned into an evil moron who makes you feel bad for whatever card you made. So you don't want a rate. I will just say they look good at first glance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bighope Posted July 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 i would change the portal thing, mayby laiter, im too lazy to do it now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 Agreed, it's 5:44am where I am. In fact, what am I doing up at this time? D: Um, is there a new card or am I going crazy? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bighope Posted July 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 yes their is a new card, i have plenty of portal cards made already i just want to bring them out slowly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 Good plan dude, no one will rate them properly if you shove them all in one go. One at a time, once its fixed, post your next. spell or trap card = Spell or Trap Card summoned = Summoned subtract = decrease life points = Life Points --wording on the last part of the effect is weird. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bighope Posted July 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 it takes me some time to get my cards fixed, becuse i have a seperet acount wair i make my cards so my main acount dosnt get crowded Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 Um? Double accounting much? Also, you can save them into card sets? It's a much quicker way to sort your cards. You can have a set like: Port-en000wtf-en015 And whenever you save the card as one of them names (the first part) it will be saved into that set. Then you wont need a separate account. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bighope Posted July 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 Ok wonce i find out how to do that ill look into it, but for now ill just stik with what i got okWow i fownd out and it is a real space saver Thanks for the tip...if you ever read this post eanyway Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 22, 2009 Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 lol, I did read it. I just went to bed earlier cos it was like 5am when I posted that... But glad to be of help, the sets thing is a lot easier than switching or searching through your cards. Currently I have 433 cards, only 50 aren't in a set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bighope Posted July 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2009 Well i just added a new card, and im going to organize them in Monster, Spell, Trap so don’t get too riled up about me adding one in the middle of the thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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