Yondaime Posted July 21, 2009 Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 [align=center]Well I have 3 new tags. I was hoping they would get me in, but idk. Here they are =P [spoiler=Kaien Tag][spoiler=V.1] [spoiler=V.2] [spoiler=Cloud Tag][spoiler=V.1] [spoiler=V.2] [spoiler=V.3] [spoiler=V.4] [spoiler=Neliel Tag] CnC[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RaidenKamikaze Posted July 21, 2009 Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 i like v.4 on cloud and also Neliel Tag you got to keep her Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yondaime Posted July 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 Thank you ^-^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RaidenKamikaze Posted July 21, 2009 Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 Thank you ^-^np anything for a fellow anime fan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exyst Posted July 21, 2009 Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 That C4D on screen in the cloud one is horrible. The first is way too simple. Effective, a bit. And there is no blending on the Neliel one. Good luck all the same ^-^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yondaime Posted July 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 That C4D on screen in the cloud one is horrible. The first is way too simple. Effective' date=' a bit. And there is no blending on the Neliel one. Good luck all the same ^-^[/quote'] I couldn't just leave it with cloud on the stock >.>Yea, the first on was from a simple Psd.I just followed the Psd =P Thank you ^-^ Doesn't look so good though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exyst Posted July 21, 2009 Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 That C4D on screen in the cloud one is horrible. The first is way too simple. Effective' date=' a bit. And there is no blending on the Neliel one. Good luck all the same ^-^[/quote'] I couldn't just leave it with cloud on the stock >.>Yea, the first on was from a simple Psd.I just followed the Psd =P Thank you ^-^ Doesn't look so good though. I'd happily vouch for you D: But I can't. Not enough authority Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yondaime Posted July 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 Thanks =D My only hope to getting in said no =( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mehmani Posted July 21, 2009 Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 I <3 the Neliel tag. Kaien one is too simple, and as Exyst said, the C4D on the Cloud one is terribad. But I hope you get in! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yondaime Posted July 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 Thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exyst Posted July 21, 2009 Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 Attempt some of my tutorials in the Tut section> I can a,lso gibe you the PSD's to help Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GHawk Posted July 21, 2009 Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 These are pretty good for first time Yondaime. I think you already pasted me. :( We should GFX battle when I get a sig done I'm working on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yondaime Posted July 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 Attempt some of my tutorials in the Tut section> I can a' date='lso gibe you the PSD's to help[/quote'] That will help =D These are pretty good for first time Yondaime. I think you already pasted me. :( We should GFX battle when I get a sig done I'm working on. Sounds fun =DDoesn't look like I'm getting in this time though D: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
problematica Posted July 21, 2009 Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 Poor attempt at getting in seeing as how there weren't any BJs being given AnywaysKaien:Focal is low qualityBackground is an empty blurNo lightingThe little specks are too numerous for this little amount of lightThe blue c4d effects don't really add much and seem rather unnecessaryThe blue glow around the color is too weak to be necessary and would mess up the lightingBlending is mehCan't really say anything about depth with this oneThis style doesn't require flowB&W version doesn't have enough contrast Cloud:Border is unnecessary, especially since it's already long and semi-narrow (lol)C4ds bring about a chaos that kills flowThey cause overcontrasting where they meet with the lighter colorsC4ds don't really make sense in their addition, seem almost like space fillerFocal is kind of low qualityNo lighting, depth, or much blendingV2 with the texture set to lighten or screen just kills it Neliel:Her outline is too strong to properly put herself in this vector settingScanlines don't work with this, also hurts blendingGreen color is too vibrant to go with herYou have flow at the bottom, but then the upper half is just vector shapes to fill up spaceBackground is uninteresting and lacking in vector artistical directionText is lackluster and boring, seems too wide and pixelly I've run out of things to critique :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WithTheWind Posted July 21, 2009 Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 I have no idea what scratch works is, but nice pics. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yondaime Posted July 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 Poor attempt at getting in seeing as how there weren't any BJs being given AnywaysKaien:Focal is low qualityBackground is an empty blurNo lightingThe little specks are too numerous for this little amount of lightThe blue c4d effects don't really add much and seem rather unnecessaryThe blue glow around the color is too weak to be necessary and would mess up the lightingBlending is mehCan't really say anything about depth with this oneThis style doesn't require flowB&W version doesn't have enough contrast Cloud:Border is unnecessary' date=' especially since it's already long and semi-narrow (lol)C4ds bring about a chaos that kills flowThey cause overcontrasting where they meet with the lighter colorsC4ds don't really make sense in their addition, seem almost like space fillerFocal is kind of low qualityNo lighting, depth, or much blendingV2 with the texture set to lighten or screen just kills it Neliel:Her outline is too strong to properly put herself in this vector settingScanlines don't work with this, also hurts blendingGreen color is too vibrant to go with herYou have flow at the bottom, but then the upper half is just vector shapes to fill up spaceBackground is uninteresting and lacking in vector artistical directionText is lackluster and boring, seems too wide and pixelly I've run out of things to critique :/[/quote'] BJ?Kaien:It's a stock, so I can't change it.Not very good at adding lighting =PI like the specks.They weren't meant to add much.I thought that looked good =P I thought there was no lighting.I'll work on it. Cloud:I think the border looks great.I couldn't leave it without C4ds.W/eThey pretty much are =PI don't think so.It looks exactly the same when it's on normal. Neliel:I know =PW/eReally?Lol, I know.Ok =PI didn't like it either. I have no idea what scratch works is' date=' but nice pics.[/quote'] It is a club here that I'm trying to get in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+sw.DISZ Posted July 21, 2009 Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 I couldn't leave it without C4ds. Why? You can't use different stocks of filters to create better effects? Don't follow PSDs to the letter. Put in your own concepts and effects, otherwise you're just very uncreative, to be honest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yondaime Posted July 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 Ok, I'll try that. I don't follow them exact. I just look at them to get an idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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