Captain C Posted July 21, 2009 Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted July 21, 2009 Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 Please stop putting "monster/spell/trap" thats bad ocg anyways ok pic though it doesnt fit the cards name. also some improper wording and OCG errors. This card needs another effect this one is still dull. 6/10 (BTW: You need to start looking at the comments of you posted cards because it seems like you arent since you continue to make a lot of the same mistakes) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zauls Posted July 21, 2009 Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 The pic is great, the effect is a little dull and the name fits the pic perfectly.OCG needs work, here is an edit:When this card is destroyed by a card effect, Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Warrior-Type monster from your hand or deck. (the bold bit can be changed to Graveyard or wherever you want, I just put anything because you didn't specify where the monster would be summoned from). Overall 6.5/10 nice try but effect could be a little more original though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lost Soul Posted July 21, 2009 Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 Please stop putting "monster/spell/trap" thats bad ocg anyways ok pic though it doesnt fit the cards name. also some improper wording and OCG errors. This card needs another effect this one is still dull. 6/10 I will be more specific "Spell, Monster, Trap", the order doesnt matter. He is fighting something that matches the shadows, therefor it kinda messes with his name. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zauls Posted July 21, 2009 Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 Please stop putting "monster/spell/trap" thats bad ocg anyways ok pic though it doesnt fit the cards name. also some improper wording and OCG errors. This card needs another effect this one is still dull. 6/10 (BTW: You need to start looking at the comments of you posted cards because it seems like you arent since you continue to make a lot of the same mistakes) Please stop being so harsh on new members. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted July 21, 2009 Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 I'm not being harsh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.GhostRyder Posted July 21, 2009 Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 All those being evil and harsh give him a break. He's new so he wont know all the OCG fixs and may make mistaks. I still make mistakes.We all made mistaks like him and people made fun of us, thats why you do it to them. So give him a chance.OCG is ok and pic is Fine.i give it a 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overlord Lucan Posted July 21, 2009 Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 Quite Dull, as its been pointed out there is OCG (Original Card Grammar) errors. Also id make it a 6 star for having 2100/2100 and an effect. Its decent for a start, but you really should work on more intresting effects. Normally try not to post cards with bland effects alone, rather try to make a set that has a common theme, this makes bland effects a bit more acceptable (I mean having a few bland effects, not all bland) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted July 21, 2009 Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 Again, I am not being harsh. I have not scolded him on his OCG I merely advised him to check his comments to see how he can fix his repeated OCG errors. And yes we all make mistakes I merely tell him the mistakes. If I dont say it is a Lovey Dovey tone that doesnt mean im being harsh. And please do not give them pity rates. Giving them real honest rates are what they need to get them to realize their mistakes. If you have 9/10 up there meaning he has 1 mistake away from 10/10 then ok ignore the above sentence but if you mean 9/10 is your highest rate then that isnt altogether a full honest rate. Also do not tell him his OCG is fine if it is not. If you do he will continue to make this mistake and be burned for it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.GhostRyder Posted July 21, 2009 Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 My ony problem with it is the name thats why i give it 9/10And when i posted that i wasnt talking about u. You gave him a Constructive Critzium.lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted July 21, 2009 Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 Oh...Sorry then Im just in a crappy mood...And I know thats no excuse Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.GhostRyder Posted July 21, 2009 Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 Dont worry i aint had the perfect day either.And when im peed off i burst into angry song....BLAH BLAH BLAH Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted July 21, 2009 Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 Hahaha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.GhostRyder Posted July 21, 2009 Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 Its seriously what I do. I cant stop.Well no sleep tonight. No Zoo tomoz <=( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted July 21, 2009 Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 Haha well Im just tired and in a serious mood Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.GhostRyder Posted July 21, 2009 Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 What you post dosnt make you look serious. lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 21, 2009 Report Share Posted July 21, 2009 card name doesn't seem to fit the pic, and that sword almost looks like Soul Edge OCG needs some work 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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