Brendano Harns Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 Cnc please! Constructive Criticism! ^_^ [spoiler=Effect] When a monster you control is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can pay 1000 Life Points to inflict damage to your opponent equal to the total number of monsters in your Graveyard, x 100. Once, during your Standby Phase, you can remove from play this card from your Graveyard to Special Summon 1 monster from your Graveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 I like it. Awesome job on the pic. The effect is useful and balanced as well. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lost Soul Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 nice 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted July 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 Thnx! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 Nice pic (finaly a self drawn that doesn't suck!) I'm not chure about the effect, though. A 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted July 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 Unbalanced, or is the OCG off? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 Impressive self drawn pic, the effect is well balanced out 9.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted July 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 Thanks! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 The first effect is possibly abusable (maybe not, because of the LP cost). Other than that, it seems fine. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mago Arcano de los Aesir Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 Pic is awful, name doesn't make much sense, but balanced. 6.78/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted July 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 Thanks! I tried to keep the damage low, and the price high to even it out. I even narrowed it down to just monsters. :) Pic is awful' date=' name doesn't make much sense, but balanced. 6.78/10[/quote'] Constructive Criticism! ^_^ [/ignored] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 no offense fuzzie, but what is in the pic? i cant see anything....it just looks like a wierd dark red blob in the middle of blackness with two lighting effects.....its not my comp screen lol...the effect is nice, and blanaced. OCG is great, i dont see any problems there :D8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mago Arcano de los Aesir Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 I'm supposed to give Constructive Criticism on a name and a picture? O_o Weird. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted July 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 It is an old pic. I made it early 2009. In March, I think. I'm pretty sure I'm going to change it, and make it lighter. My screen is actually much lighter than everyone else's, so that is probably why. XD I'm supposed to give Constructive Criticism on a name and a picture? O_o Weird. On something, at least. I din't say it had to be on the name or the picture. If you are not capable of giving constructive criticism, then it would probably be in your best interest to just leave. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 >.< it has nothing to do with the screen lol xDits just an un-clear pic... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted July 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 It looks fine on my screen because my screen is really light. Everyone else who has a normal screen... But you know what I mean. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 i meant....oh nvm >.< xDwhat or who is IN the pic? i cant tell... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zauls Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 I like it. Awesome job on the pic. The effect is useful and balanced as well. 10/10 This. ^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted July 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 no offense fuzzie' date=' but what is in the pic? i cant see anything....it just looks like a wierd dark red blob in the middle of blackness with two lighting effects.....its not my comp screen lol...the effect is nice, and blanaced. OCG is great, i dont see any problems there :D8/10[/quote'] Purplox Dragon, Amphibious Mechanical, Crab Spider, and lots of other cards melded to gether. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 O.ouh........are u sure.......?i dont see em xDchange the color of the background and make the colors more vivid, i think it would be more visible then... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted July 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 New pic is up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 im finally able to see cards, the "glitch" just stopped O.omuch better then the first one.and much much more clear.try to make the hand a bit more anatomically correct though, its to twisted lol xDcolors are a lot better, as well as the shading on the hand.try to crop the image more, so there isnt as much blank space.overall, its a major improvement :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted August 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 29, 2009 Thanks! ^_^ It was done in two min. New pic is up! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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