y2001 Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 Thanks for the feedback, i know it's choppy so dont be too cruel although constructive criticism is appreciated. This card cannot be normal summoned or special summoned unless the controller has 8 or more fire monsters in their graveyard. When this card is summoned it's attack and defence points equal the number of fire type monsters in their graveyard x 500. Once per turn you may special summon 2 level 4 or lower monsters from the graveyard to the field in face up defence mode. You may not tribute these monsters, however by sending 1 card from your hand to the graveyard and 1 revived monster on your side of the field to the graveyard, you may reduce the attack and defence points of your opponents monsters by 1 thousand for the battle phase that this effect is used. When this card is destroyed, destroy all monsters on your side of the field and recieve damage equal to the attack points of the monsters destroyed. This card cannot attack on the turn that it is sumoned Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chaos black Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 lots of details....... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fish-eye Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 This card cannot be Normal Summoned. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by having 8 or more FIRE monsters in your Graveyard. This card cannot attack the turn it is Summoned. The original ATK of this card is equal to the number of FIRE monsters you have in your Graveyard x 500. Once per turn you may Special Summon 2 level 4 or lower monsters from your Graveyard in defense position. These monsters cannot be tributrd for a Tribute Summon. During the Battle Phase you can send 1 card from your hand and 1 monster you control to reduce the ATK of the monsters your opponnet controls by 1000. When this card is destroyed, destroy all monster card you control and decrese your Life Points equal to the ATK of the destroyed monsters. i think this is how it should be writin. my OCG is'nt the best. but don't forget to put CAPs where needed. also replace the atk/def stats from "X" to "?" the card is kinda OPed(overpowered) but its good for your first. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
y2001 Posted July 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 Thanks for feedback Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zauls Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 This card cannot be Normal Summoned. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by having 8 or more FIRE monsters in your Graveyard. This card cannot attack the turn it is Summoned. The original ATK of this card is equal to the number of FIRE monsters you have in your Graveyard x 500. Once per turn you may Special Summon 2 level 4 or lower monsters from your Graveyard in defense position. These monsters cannot be tributrd for a Tribute Summon. During the Battle Phase you can send 1 card from your hand and 1 monster you control to reduce the ATK of the monsters your opponnet controls by 1000. When this card is destroyed' date=' destroy all monster card you control and decrese your Life Points equal to the ATK of the destroyed monsters. i think this is how it should be writin. my OCG is'nt the best. but don't forget to put CAPs where needed. also replace the atk/def stats from "X" to "?" the card is kinda OPed(overpowered) but its good for your first. 7/10[/quote'] This. Good OCG fix fish eye! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atom45 Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 Thats alot on the Effect... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkness303 Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 the picture is a little bad but the effect is good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrunoFPG Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 that a little bad, is a evil creature Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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