pimp_7 Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 Here are some of my cards. I hope you like. Please help me if you notice any strange thing on my cards. I want to make new cards very soon xD, so I hope i'm doing well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 Saint and Goddess are not real types, though the pics are VERY well done 6/10 until you change the types Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pimp_7 Posted July 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 Saint and Goddess are not real types' date=' though the pics are VERY well done 6/10 until you change the types[/quote'] I know Saints are not real types, but if I don't do like this, the effects i'm planning for my cards will be very complex =§ I will first finish my Saint Seiya deck and play with it, after this i maybe change the type and the affects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 fine, but I'm not changing my rate until you make those changes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Assclown Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 Fake types are a no no. Pics are great. Effects are ok. Name, yea, alright. 6.5 / 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 er...it doesnt really matter if u dont wanna change it, this is the realistic card section so the cards posted here have to use real types :/lol, the pics are all from that show-i-cant-remember-the-name-of show xDthey look pretty good on a YGO card though xDi see a few tiny minor OCG errorsno rating becuz of fake types... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pimp_7 Posted July 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 Well, I don't care the rate anyway, all I want is to create a nice deck to play with my friends. But I'm new here and I didn't notice that I have to post this type of cards in other place so, I'm sorry about this. Now I'll post in the right place ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pimp_7 Posted July 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 I did a few more cards, please take a look and give me advices about cards effects to finish a deck, I'm running out of ideas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 The pics are good. the effects are okay. Your OCG needs work to. No fake types. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pimp_7 Posted July 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 Sorry, but... what is OCG? =P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zkaiser Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 Where are the people whining that this is pop culture? I expect them to show up any minute now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pimp_7 Posted July 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 I post here cause I don't like the pop culture forum. The guys there create ridiculous cards and the rates are good anyway. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 They're still Pop Culture cards, though. Anyway... -The images are good.-The effects are quite basic.-The balance is okay.-The OCG (Official Card Grammar) could use some work.-The fake types are frowned upon. You can still make them Warriors and change their names up a bit to INCLUDE Bronze, Silver, or Gold Saint. That way, you can say that you can search/affect monsters with those words in their name (like the Gravekeepers and Six Samurai do with their cards). I'll give these a 7/10 for the moment. It would be nice to make the cards have more interesting effects. I'm sure that the characters of the anime could do more. The main thing with your OCG is capitalization errors. There are tutorials here that can help you with it. Not bad, dude. Keep up the good work. 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 new ones have good pics, but the OCG needs work and the effects are too simple 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pimp_7 Posted July 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 25, 2009 They're still Pop Culture cards' date=' though. Anyway... -The images are good.-The effects are quite basic.-The balance is okay.-The OCG (Official Card Grammar) could use some work.-The fake types are frowned upon. You can still make them Warriors and change their names up a bit to INCLUDE Bronze, Silver, or Gold Saint. That way, you can say that you can search/affect monsters with those words in their name (like the Gravekeepers and Six Samurai do with their cards). I'll give these a 7/10 for the moment. It would be nice to make the cards have more interesting effects. I'm sure that the characters of the anime could do more. The main thing with your OCG is capitalization errors. There are tutorials here that can help you with it. Not bad, dude. Keep up the good work. 8)[/quote'] Thanks for the patience and help. The name of the cards will be a bit longer, but is not really dificult. When I have patience I maybe change Pegasus Seiya - First Cloth to Bronze Saint Pegasus Seiya - First Cloth, for example. About the effects being basic, could you please be more specific about what cards and what type of effect I could add? This is really dificult :/But you know, I didn't really want to do awesome effects to all cards, some of them need to be more basic. Anyway, here are two new cards, I hope you guys like it: Effect: This card's effect can be activated just once per turn. When this card is battling with an opponent's atacking positioned monster you can activate the following effect during the Damage Step:- The original ATK of the battling monsters become their original DEF and vice-versa, until the end of the Damage Step. Effect: Activate this card when a "Pegasus Seiya", "Dragon Shiryu", Swan Hyoga", Andromeda Shun" or "Phoenix Ikki" monster you control is destroyed as a result of battle and sent from the field to your Graveyard. Special Summon a monster from your Graveyard that has one of those names in its card name, then select and destroy a card on the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 25, 2009 Report Share Posted July 25, 2009 Bronze Spirit is not a real type, both pics look very good and effects are balanced though 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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