ObsoleteAcc Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 just drew this, waddya guys think? ^_^remember, im only 14, so dont be to harsh xD[spoiler= Drawing] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 It creeps me out just by the way it stares at you @_@ Well the image is good, maybe add color. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted July 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 lol, i agree it looks like some girl on a painting whos ghost is gonna attack you xDand are u kidding? adding color to this would be like trying to make naruto abridged as good as YGO abridged...not gonna happen xDthx for commenting ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 I might be, well anyway good drawing is good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted July 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 thanks!! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuro no Keiyakushu Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 Nice, especially for a 14-year old =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 the nose is a little to big ;)but it looks really cool :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeREVOLUTION Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 It looks great! I really don't like the hair though. Make it softer..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted July 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 thx for ur comments ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 Ok since your a fellow artist of the pencil I can give you some advice here, (Art school helps :P) -On your shadowing of the lips, the bit on the edge of the right should be shorter then on the left because it takes from the lighting of the face.-Her left nostril is a bit deformed and with the center of the nose it makes it seem a lot bigger then it should be. Fix the nostril and make the middle end a bit sooner for a smaller nose.-Her Right eye looks off since your made the eye detail for the left much much bigger, even if your trying to make it seem like her right is closer up you should still make the detail a tinnnnny bit thicker and tone down her lower eye lashes on the right eye so it will make the left side of her face more pronoun.-The top of the hair is actually fine, but for edges of hair either go with jagged or a bit rounded tips instead of a mix of the two for a more... natural feel to it, also fix some of the shading at the point where the hair meets the top left of her skull to make it seem more attached. (Or if thats the head im thinking of with the lightly shaded gray instead of fragments of hair darken that a smidge.)-Add a neck, it just looks weird to have hair coming down from the middle of the head Just some helpful advice from a art student to a young artist :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted July 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 thanks for all the tips!btw, i drew this on a graphics tablet not a pencil :Dand the "hair" underneath her head IS her neck xDlollook at that whole part underneath her head as a neck and ull see what i mean loli think im gonna try a guy next lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 yeah i noticed, I usually draw anime or abstract object art so it just looked weird to me with the heavy shading but I can see it now lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nikkiboy029 Posted July 25, 2009 Report Share Posted July 25, 2009 ok since i know you don't like criticismi will say it is very good for a 14 year old dude :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted July 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 25, 2009 lol xDthx nikki im trying orlando bloom next ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I-dreezyAFG Posted July 25, 2009 Report Share Posted July 25, 2009 lol' date=' i agree it looks like some girl on a painting whos ghost is gonna attack you xD[/b'] ^this^. but it looks good. 9/10 because it scares me like it hypnotizing @__# Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted July 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 25, 2009 lol, thx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maliki Posted July 25, 2009 Report Share Posted July 25, 2009 I am getting hypnotized looking at it O.O Anyway, its great Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted July 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 26, 2009 lol, thx xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sparta™ Posted July 26, 2009 Report Share Posted July 26, 2009 Good drawing, although I'd recommend a more visible neck. It gives more details to the head form and weight (if there is any, lol). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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