Shatterfangs Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 shadow warrior is not in the post he is just in my sig Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maliki Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 OP'ed should be moved to Any Other Cards 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 I agree, but I really like the pic where did you get it?! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 the most overused pic everway to op'dLets go back to the first grade and capitilize shall weocg4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PANDORUM™ Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 I agree' date=' but I really like the pic where did you get it?![/quote'] don't like it it's way overused. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Lightning Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 Capitalize and your OCG is off. Also your pic is overused. I like the idea of your effect though. Join this club! http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-137084-page-1.html Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 i) Don't make DIVINE monstersii) Capitalise namesiii) Third most overused Dragon pictureiv) Capitalise 'Thunder'v) If it's a Spirit Monster, give it a Spirit monster's effect.vi) Overpoweredvii) OCG errors. (Multiple) 1/10 Take Sweetlightning's advice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lacikus Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 A little overused pic OP-ed 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 1st pic overused, effects are too powerful anyway 5.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zhou666 Posted September 16, 2009 Report Share Posted September 16, 2009 Well here's the breakdown: -Name: God of Dragons? Doesn't that sound a little...obvious? Gods, are immediately given high effects and most people are led to assume this. Not a totally smart move. However, you did use a slightly original name, "Thrunder" albeit, not totally awesome, but hey, ain't something I would have come up with)-Attribute: No more DIVINE monsters, we have God cards already, we don't need another.-Type: Fits the name, but he couldn't be a Spirit monster, look up what they are before you go about using them.-Effect: Terrible OCG, but heck, I'm not awesome at OCG either. His effect doesn't fit Spirit monsters.-ATK/DEF: Just a little too powerful, if you made it a little more complicated to summon him, maybe. Obelisk takes 3 sacrifices, that may not be too complicated, but it'll still take a little while. Perhaps you should make it so that the two monsters are on the field, because with a lucky draw, you could throw him out on the field on the first turn.-Picture: Well I like how it looks, but clearly it's overused, therefore it's no good here. OVERALL:4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
General Assclown Posted September 16, 2009 Report Share Posted September 16, 2009 i) Don't make DIVINE monstersii) Capitalise namesiii) Third most overused Dragon pictureiv) Capitalise 'Thunder'v) If it's a Spirit Monster' date=' give it a Spirit monster's effect.vi) Overpoweredvii) OCG errors. (Multiple) 1/10 Take Sweetlightning's advice.[/quote'] ^ This ^ Pic - Ugh....so overused... - 1/10Effect - OCG errors...major OCG errors - 1/10Originality - Meh - 2/10 Overall - 4/30 = 13% Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blademac Posted September 16, 2009 Report Share Posted September 16, 2009 I like the pic (even if it is overused). I would assume that the "God of Dragons" would be a dragon himself... oh well. I agree that he is OP'ed, but there are easy fixes 1. makes summoning more difficult2. reduce attack power3. include a detrimental effect4. prevent from attacking directly All in all, not a bad start. You just need some tweaking. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted September 16, 2009 Report Share Posted September 16, 2009 OPed 5/10 OCG errors Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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