Ethaniel Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 Effect: 1 Tuner + "Relinquished" Once per turn, you can take control of 1 monster that your opponent controls, and equip it to this card. The attack and defence of this card become the original attack and defence of the equiped monster, and this card gains the equiped monster's effect. If this card were to be destroyed or removed from play, you can destroy or remove from play the equiped card. This card may only have one catrd equipped to it at any given time. When this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon 1 of the materials used to Synchro Summon this card. Effect: This card can be used with any other monster, including another Tuner, to summon a Synchro Monster from your Extras Deck, to a maximum of level 5. A few of the peices of the descriptions don't match whats written on the card, this is because I haven't gotten around to changing them yet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.GhostRyder Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 Major OCG work but i like your creativity.8/10 on creativitycard has no rate sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 Major OCG work but i like your creativity.8/10 on creativitycard has no rate sorry. You obviously haven't heard of the Original Relinquished's effect, have you? This is like OP'd Relinquished. Has no Limit, except for 5. Gains ATK and DEF and Effect of every monster it takes control of. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 nobody would use it :(2 stars synchro is very hart to summonand then your summon condition --> that makes it UP and useless also the images is only the invert of the real one -.- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ethaniel Posted July 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 What do you mean by 'Major OCG work'? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 that means work on your OCG (Official Card Grammar) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
anthony.tharpe Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 alot like thousand eyed restrict to me 3/10 for the card 7/10 for creativity(negative of relinquished i never thought of that.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ethaniel Posted July 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 nobody would use it :(2 stars synchro is very hart to summonand then your summon condition --> that makes it UP and useless also the images is only the invert of the real one -.- That's why I plan to make a special Tuner specificaly for this card. And which condition is that? And yes' date=' the image is inverted, this is a recreation of the origianal. I do that every now and again.[hr']that means work on your OCG (Official Card Grammar) Would you kindly point out what you see wrong with the OCG? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 lol^^you misspelled field and some more graveyard =Graveyardone = 1and more not time anymore Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ethaniel Posted July 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 Updated. That work for you, Wanderley? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 White Relinquished is just a stronger Relinquished, too many effects siphoned, pic is siphoned as well 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 White Relinquished is just a stronger Relinquished' date=' too many effects siphoned, pic is siphoned as well 5/10[/quote'] Hence my earlier post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ethaniel Posted July 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 Hency MY earlier post! Quotha: 'this is a recreation of the origianal. I do that every now and again.' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted July 25, 2009 Report Share Posted July 25, 2009 Hency MY earlier post! Quotha: 'this is a recreation of the origianal. I do that every now and again.' Yeah, a very OP'd recreation of the original. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maliki Posted July 25, 2009 Report Share Posted July 25, 2009 The first one sucks 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted July 25, 2009 Report Share Posted July 25, 2009 The image is just an invert which shows lack of creativity. Your OCG is terrible. And it's quite hard to get out without the tuner. And the tuner is way to OP'd you could get out a level 8 synchro in one turn using double summon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ethaniel Posted July 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 26, 2009 Notice to the Obvious Squad: That's kinda the point! And I'm sorry if my OCG sucks, but in case you haven't noticed, this is my first time making a card. Yes, it's a reversed image of Relinquished, I though it would look cool, plus it fits with the whole 'White' Archtype I'm going for. As for it not being creative, I was never going for creativity. No duh. This is a remake, I don't care if it's OP'd or anything like that. yes, it's near imposible to get out w/o the sppecial Tuner, but THAT'S THE POINT OF THEM BEING A SET! Unless you have CONSTRUCTIVE critisism, please don't post here. This means that 'This card sucks', 'Your OCG is crap', and stuff like that is unwanted. If you think there is something wrong, please just point it out, and then state what you would do to make it better. Thankyou. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted July 26, 2009 Report Share Posted July 26, 2009 Major OCG work but i like your creativity.8/10 on creativitycard has no rate sorry. You obviously haven't heard of the Original Relinquished's effect' date=' have you? This is like OP'd Relinquished. Has no Limit, except for 5. Gains ATK and DEF and Effect of every monster it takes control of. [b']Put a limit on the monster gain to around 3 at most, or gain half the ATK and DEF of the monsters is controls.[/b] Read bolded. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted July 26, 2009 Report Share Posted July 26, 2009 well this is kinda creative but it is a OPed version of Relinquished. same pic but inverted. ~6/10~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ethaniel Posted July 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 26, 2009 well this is kinda creative but it is a OPed version of Relinquished. same pic but inverted. ~6/10~ Go up a few posts. Read. Then try again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kizzfan911 Posted July 26, 2009 Report Share Posted July 26, 2009 I like the pic on reaper tuner. I don't mind the pic if it's an effect monster. Instead of putting "Relinquished"+ 1 Tuner, it needs to be 1 Tuner + "Relinquished" on the new member scale i give them both 7.5s. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ethaniel Posted July 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 26, 2009 There, that's fixed up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 26, 2009 Report Share Posted July 26, 2009 it still doesn't make it much better than before though :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ethaniel Posted July 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 27, 2009 Would you kindly read my rant a few posts back? To sum it up: unless you are going to post constructive critisism, meaning helping to fix the card by pointing out flaws and your solutions to said flaws, don't post here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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