feloman15 Posted July 25, 2009 Report Share Posted July 25, 2009 hiiiii!!! :D:D im new in this forum it is my first set of card. by the way i'm Peruvian8). I hope you can understand what i 8try to say :?:lol:*0* *0* *0* *0* *0* *0* *0* *0* *0*MY pack !!!!!!!!!!!!!!Ihope this can capt the atention:?:lol:Booster Pack Monster CardsAdaDuring your opponent turn the original ATK of this card is 1800. If this card battle with a Beast or BeastWarrior-Type monster this card gain 500 ATK during the Damange AuraEach time your opponent draws a card your can send one card on his/her hand to the graveyard by discard one card from your hand. BrigitteThis card can be special summon from your graveyard when your opponent draw cards except by normal draw. ZoeIf this card battle with a Normal monster this card double its ATK. If this card is Battle with an Earth or Ligth Monster this card gain 500 ATK only during the damange step. DiríanIf this card battle with a Spellcaster or Warrior-Type monster this card gain 300 ATK points During the Damange step. RonanIf this card battle with a Dragon, Zombi or Fiend-Type monster this card gain 400 ATK During the Damange step. KeithThis monster cannot be special summon. This monster can only be Tributte summon by Tribute one "Evolution" monster on your side of the field. When a monster is special summoned on your opponent side of the field add one "Evolution" card from your deck to your hand. LassWhen this card infflict battle damange you and your opponent draws a card, if that card is a level 4 Effect monster special summon it on face up defence position.(Ingnoring the summon condition). Salazar & HermesThis card ATK is the number of monsters on the field X 500 (excluding this card). It ATK is Double during your opponent turn. TahibanThis card cannot be special summon except by removing from play 3 Evolution monster from your Graveyard or Field. Each time this card inflict battle damange you draw one card. JinThis card cannot be special summon except by removing from play 3 Evolution monster from your Graveyard or Field. Each time this card inflict battle damange your opponent discard a card from his/her hand. Spell/Trap CardsImpact!!!This card cannot be negate. This card is destroyed on your 3º Standby phase. All "Evolution" Monsters gain 500 ATK. When an "Evoluttion" monsters attack with an ATK that is higher than the DEF of your opponent's Defense Position monster, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points. Magic AttackThis card cannot be negated. This card is destroyed on your 3º turn. Each time one "Evolution" monster you control Attacks directly you can destroy one Spell or Trap card on the field or Send one card from your opponent card to the graveyard. ChargeThis card cannot be negated. This card is destroyed on your 3º turn. Each time by tributte one "Evolution" monster on your side of the field destroy all monster on your opponent side of the field. If this effect is activated the ATK of all monster on your side of the field is Halfven. Team PowerThis card cannot be negated. This card is destroyed on your 3º turn. Once per turn, you can select 1 face-up "Evolution" monster you control. It gains ATK equal to the total ATK of all face-up "Evolution" monsters on the field except itself. Monsters other than the selected monster cannot attack the turn you activate this effect. EvasionThis card cannot be negated. This card is destroyed on your 3º turn. Once per turn you can negatte the attack that Designed one "Evolution" monster on your side of the field. Direct AttackThis card cannot be negated. This card is destroyed on your 3º turn. Once per turn you select one "Evolution" monster on your side of the field and inflict damange to you opponent life points equal to the half ATK of the select monster. If this effect is activated you cannot conduct your Battle Phase. NEW!!RevengeThis card cannot be negated. This card is destroyed on your 5º turn. If a monster with 2000 ATK or higher Destroy a "Evolution" Monster on your side of the field that monster is destroyed at the end of damange step. the RITUAL CARDS Unexpected ArrivalThis card can be used to Ritual Summon "Evolution - Yael", or "Evolution - Kasease". You must also offer Tribute monsters from the field or your hand whose total Levels equal the Level of the Ritual Monster you are attempting to Ritual Summon. YaelThis card can only be Ritual summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Unexpected Arrival". Once per turn, by revealing 1 or more "Evolution" monsters in your hand to your opponent, this card gains ATK equal to the total number of revealed monsters x 300 until the End Phase. KaseaseThis card can only be Ritual summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Unexpected Arrival". When this card is ritual summon destroy one Spell or Trap card on the field. Each time this card inflict battle damange to your opponent life points draw a card. PLEASE TELL ME HOW CAN I IMPROVE IT!!!:( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.GhostRyder Posted July 25, 2009 Report Share Posted July 25, 2009 I like were you are going with these and I would like to see some more but heres what I think on these.OCG needs work. (OCG - Official Card Grammar)Effects are ok but some or a bit dull.The pics are ok but some look like the same person but in differnt outfit.Plus.... YOU POSTED THE SAME CARD TWICE!!!!7/10 good try Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
feloman15 Posted July 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 25, 2009 ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!! X( X( X( X( X( i don't see that okok THANKS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 25, 2009 Report Share Posted July 25, 2009 some OCG errors pics looks very well done Most effects are fine, but a few are too simple/basic 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
feloman15 Posted July 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 26, 2009 PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:( SEE IT!!!!!!!!!!:( I IMPROVE IT A LITLE BUT TELL ME WHAT NEED THESE CARD TO IMPROVE!!!!!!!!!!!! :(a and please rate it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~RoBoTiClOvEr~ Posted July 26, 2009 Report Share Posted July 26, 2009 only if I could've had those10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Chippy Posted July 26, 2009 Report Share Posted July 26, 2009 really nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mufalmar Posted July 26, 2009 Report Share Posted July 26, 2009 I like were you are going with these and I would like to see some more but heres what I think on these.OCG needs work. (OCG - Official Card Grammar)Effects are ok but some or a bit dull.The pics are ok but some look like the same person but in differnt outfit.Plus.... YOU POSTED THE SAME CARD TWICE!!!!7/10 good try His cards are based on the MMO Grand Chase. Some of them ARE the same person. Grand Chase is based on classes. Go play it and you'll understand. His grammar is off because he's Peruvian o.o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
feloman15 Posted July 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 26, 2009 His cards are based on the MMO Grand Chase. Some of them ARE the same person. Grand Chase is based on classes. Go play it and you'll understand. His grammar is off because he's Peruvian o.o yeahhhhhhhhhhhh!!!! than for understand me!!!!!!XXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDX:D:D:D:D:D:D:D ahhh by the way i crated tht cards using the images of granchase members because looks like the original cardXDTHE NEW HEROS EVOLUTION MONSTERS jajajaja XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wolfblademaster Posted July 26, 2009 Report Share Posted July 26, 2009 love it, great idea 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragonlordmullens Posted July 26, 2009 Report Share Posted July 26, 2009 hiiiii!!! :D:D im new in this forum it is my first set of card. by the way i'm Peruvian8). I hope you can understand what i 8try to say :?:lol:*0* *0* *0* *0* *0* *0* *0* *0* *0*MY pack !!!!!!!!!!!!!!Ihope this can capt the atention:?:lol: AdaDuring your opponent turn the original ATK of this card is 1800. If this card battle with a Beast or BeastWarrior-Type monster this card gain 500 ATK during the Damange AuraEach time your opponent draws a card your can send one card on his/her hand by discard one card from your hand. BrigitteThis card can be special summon from your graveyard when your opponent draw cards except by normal draw. ZoeIf this card battle with a Normal monster this card double its ATK. If this card is Battle with an Earth or Ligth Monster this card gain 500 ATK only during the damange step. DiríanIf this card battle with a Spellcaster or Warrior-Type monster this card gain 300 ATK points During the Damange step. RonanIf this card battle with a Dragon' date=' Zombi or Fiend-Type monster this card gain 400 ATK During the Damange step. [img']http://img32.imageshack.us/img32/1917/226092g.jpg[/img]KeithThis monster cannot be special summon. This monster can only be Tributte summon by Tribute one "Evolution" monster on your side of the field. When a monster is special summoned on your opponent side of the field add one "Evolution" card from your deck to your hand. LassWhen this card infflict battle damange you and your opponent draws a card, if that card is a level 4 Effect monster special summon it on face up defence position.(Ingnoring the summon condition). Salazar & HermesThis card ATK is the number of monsters on the field X 500 (excluding this card). It ATK is Double during your opponent turn. Impact!!!This card cannot be negate. This card is destroyed on your 3º Standby phase. All "Evolution" Monsters gain 500 ATK. When an "Evoluttion" monsters attack with an ATK that is higher than the DEF of your opponent's Defense Position monster, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points. Magic AttackThis card cannot be negated. This card is destroyed on your 3º turn. Each time one "Evolution" monster you control Attacks directly you can destroy one Spell or Trap card on the field or Send one card from your opponent card to the graveyard. ChargeThis card cannot be negated. This card is destroyed on your 3º turn. Each time by tributte one "Evolution" monster on your side of the field destroy all monster on your opponent side of the field. If this effect is activated the ATK of all monster on your side of the field is Halfven. Team PowerThis card cannot be negated. This card is destroyed on your 3º turn. Once per turn, you can select 1 face-up "Evolution" monster you control. It gains ATK equal to the total ATK of all face-up "Evolution" monsters on the field except itself. Monsters other than the selected monster cannot attack the turn you activate this effect. EvasionThis card cannot be negated. This card is destroyed on your 3º turn. Once per turn you can negatte the attack that Designed one "Evolution" monster on your side of the field. Direct AttackThis card cannot be negated. This card is destroyed on your 3º turn. Once per turn you select one "Evolution" monster on your side of the field and inflict damange to you opponent life points equal to the half ATK of the select monster. If this effect is activated you cannot conduct your Battle Phase. TahibanThis card cannot be special summon except by removing from play 3 Evolution monster from your Graveyard or Field. Each time this card inflict battle damange you draw one card. JinThis card cannot be special summon except by removing from play 3 Evolution monster from your Graveyard or Field. Each time this card inflict battle damange your opponent discard a card from his/her hand. PLEASE TELL ME HOW CAN I IMPROVE IT!!!:( maybe u should make a ritual,fusion,etc. that has 2 do with these,as in a big and strong evolution card. ex. the evolution king or something Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
feloman15 Posted July 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 26, 2009 ohhhgood idea I try to make an Ritual card *0* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted July 26, 2009 Report Share Posted July 26, 2009 The pics and idea are good. You just have very small OCG errors. Some of the effects are quite plain as well. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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