[OR]Sheena the Magical Warrior[OR]

[.Leo]

I made this card for a Tourny and i wanted to see what you thought of it. i might think it is UPed but if you think other wise that is fine.

 

~CARD HAS BEEN EDITED~

 

[align=center]Sheena the Magical Warrior

1 LIGHT Tuner monster + 1 or more LIGHT non-Tuner monsters

When this monster is Synchro Summoned remove it from play. When you draw a Spell Card you can Special Summon this monster. Destroy the Spell Card that was drawn. As long as this monster remains on the field all Trap Cards drawn are removed from play.[/align]

[ragnarok1945]

the effect will never activate for removing from play traps because it'll remove itself from play right away the second it's summoned

 

5/10

[.Leo]

ok i will change the effect to fix that. didin't see that. i will change the effect a bit to make it more useful and easy to use.

[ragnarok1945]

you do that, then I'll re-rate it

[Card Constructor]

the effect will never activate for removing from play traps because it'll remove itself from play right away the second it's summoned

 

5/10

 

On the contrary, since Synchro-Summoning is a Special-Summon, the card would never have been removed from play in the first place.

 

Either way, you may want to fix the effect, but I understand what you were trying to do. It's kind of like a Jinzo, but weaker.

 

Unfortunately, I wouldn't add this in my extra deck.

 

-EDIT-

 

You changed the effect as soon as I posted.

 

Why did you switch it to a Spell Card? You kept the Trap removal the same however, which I feel was not your intention.

[.Leo]

any suggestions like raise the ATK and Star level. Synchro Summon is a type of Summon but it isn't exactly like a Special SUmmon

[ragnarok1945]

if I was to raise the atk, maybe up to 1700 is good

[.Leo]

ok thx. i will wok on that right now

[Card Constructor]

Synchro Summon is a type of Summon but it isn't exactly like a Special Summon

 

It's a Special Summon. That's why cards like Royal Oppression work on them. It doesn't matter any more though, because you've already edited your card.

[ragnarok1945]

with the corrections I'll raise the rate to 8/10 now

[.Leo]

ok thx for the rate =)

[.Leo]

~BUMP~

[♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥]

1 LIGHT Tuner + 1 or more LIGHT non-Tuner monsters
When this monster is Synchro Summoned, remove it from play. When you draw a Spell Card, you can Special Summon this monster if it is removed from play. Trap Cards that are drawn by both players are removed from play immediately.

 

I think that's more of what you meant, because you wouldn't want to be able to Special Summon it from your Extra Deck.

[.Leo]

yeah i guess so. i tried to make an interesting effect because i used this to enter a contest and i wanted to make it different

[LiAM]

Confusing effect-

 

Original:

1 LIGHT Tuner monster + 1 or more LIGHT non-Tuner monsters

When this monster is Synchro Summoned remove it from play. When you draw a Spell Card you can Special Summon this monster. Destroy the Spell Card that was drawn. As long as this monster remains on the field all Trap Cards drawn are removed from play.

 

Errors:

monster = card

 

Card flaws:

The last part with the trap cards being removed from play, what about your opponents?

 

Fix:

1 LIGHT Tuner + 1 or more LIGHT non-Tuner monsters.

When this card is Synchro Summoned remove it from play. When you draw a Spell Card you can Special Summon this card from your Graveyard, discard the drawn Spell Card. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, all Trap Cards drawn are removed from play.

[.Leo]

yeah it means that all trap cards drawn are destroyed

[♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥]

You don't need the as long "as this card remains face-up on the field" anymore. It's redundant.

 

And you do not HAVE to change EVERY word that's monster to card. Some effects sound a lot better leaving it as monster.

[.Leo]

yeah sometimes it sounds better like that. it is kinda confusing wiht the OLD/New OCG and all the different wordings and it just gets real confusing what is right or wrong

[♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥]

They're all "right." I just do whatever sounds BETTER. Heck, you can even mix it in an effect if you want, as long as it sounds good.

[LiAM]

You don't need the as long "as this card remains face-up on the field" anymore. It's redundant.

 

And you do not HAVE to change EVERY word that's monster to card. Some effects sound a lot better leaving it as monster.

 

monster applies to something on the field

card applies to it in your hand, deck, graveyard etc.

 

select 1 monster your opponent controls.

 

Also when the effect on the monster talks about itself, it refers to it as a card.

'you can special summon this card'.

[.Leo]

yeah thats how i do it. i once read the whole OCG thread and it was real confusing what is usable and non-usable OCG. for me. whatever sounds and looks good is probably correct

[♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥]

monster applies to something on the field

card applies to it in your hand' date=' deck, graveyard etc.

 

select 1 monster your opponent controls.

 

Also when the effect on the monster talks about itself, it refers to it as a card.

'you can special summon this card'.

[/quote']

 

You can Special Summon this monster from your hand, deck, or Graveyard to your side of the field.

 

You can Special Summon this card from your hand, deck, or Graveyard to your side of the field.

 

They're the same thing. Just old/new OCG. Nobody cares anymore.

[LiAM]

monster applies to something on the field

card applies to it in your hand' date=' deck, graveyard etc.

 

select 1 monster your opponent controls.

 

Also when the effect on the monster talks about itself, it refers to it as a card.

'you can special summon this card'.

[/quote']

 

You can Special Summon this monster from your hand, deck, or Graveyard to your side of the field.

 

You can Special Summon this card from your hand, deck, or Graveyard to your side of the field.

 

They're the same thing. Just old/new OCG. Nobody cares anymore.

 

"You can Special Summon this card from you hand, Deck or Graveyard."

 

D: that's newer.

[.Leo]

who really cares as long as it doesn't say "I can play on cardboard card from my hand grave and deck"

[LiAM]

lol.

 

I want to make a card with OCG errors in it now.