tswetboy88 Posted July 26, 2009 Report Share Posted July 26, 2009 OK this is my first card set, actully first post but most of the time I spend making cards, but I finally decided to show everyone what I've been working on for so long. Truthfully I don't mind people expressing there feelings so type what you feel. I appologize for the cards Image but they were the best I thought fit. By the Way I did not do this to be Sacriligeous but got the idea from looking up the Names of Angels. This card may be summoned without the ritual card "Lost Archangel Wings" but must have a tribute of 12 stars. If summoned without the ritual this card may not attack but instead must remove a card from play on each players turn. If summoned with the Ritual card you may bring 1 Divine Mech from your graveyard to the field, and Every turn this cards attack decreases by 1000 points. This card can only be summoned by removing 3 cards with divine mech in its name from play. Every 3 turns during your opponents standby phase you can swap the attack and defense of this card for 1 turn. Once per turn you can select 2 monster from ethier players field and they will be removed from play after you end your turn, instead of attacking that turn.For every card that is removed from play this card gain 500 atk points and 700 def points.This card is used to ritual summon "Divine Mech- Luciferr". You must also offer who's total level stars equal 12 or more as a tibute from your field or hand.This card allows you to summon Divine Mechs for half of there total star level, but also lowers there attack by 1000 points.For each card that is removed from play inflict 500 points of direct damage to your opponent. That's all of them for now so I guess just write what you think about them!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mordred.jr Posted July 26, 2009 Report Share Posted July 26, 2009 good first cards 7/10 but whats with all the duelmasters pics? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SteelBolt Posted July 26, 2009 Report Share Posted July 26, 2009 nice cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wolfblademaster Posted July 26, 2009 Report Share Posted July 26, 2009 Good cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathSDelano Posted July 26, 2009 Report Share Posted July 26, 2009 nice cards some are a little blurry though but nice way of using the dual master card pics Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted July 26, 2009 Report Share Posted July 26, 2009 Please don't use Duel Master Pics. They are from anoother card game thus, making them unrealistic. Minor OCG errors. Also, don't make Vanillas(Normal Monsters). 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 26, 2009 Report Share Posted July 26, 2009 some blurry pics, a few cards need effects, minor OCG errors, and Duel master pics shouldn't be here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tswetboy88 Posted July 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 26, 2009 Nice constructive criticism !! I do realize I used alot of duelmaster pics but most of them I knew were perfect for the card. Some still need work (diffrent pics, revising) but overall I feel content with them. There probaly will be new cards added to this set and many completely reconsrtucted ones in the future. So um the Normal cards or "Vinillas" were kind of a rush job and will be changed. Any criticism, advice, card request ideas for set just post.also these are from my ps3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted July 26, 2009 Report Share Posted July 26, 2009 A lot of the pics are blurry and your OCG is off. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted July 26, 2009 Report Share Posted July 26, 2009 OCG is off. why did you make a divine type??? the are ok. and vanillas seed an effect or support Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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