Guest Posted July 27, 2009 Report Share Posted July 27, 2009 Now there is a few main problems with this tag, the point of the thread is to see if any of you are actually skilled enough to point them out. GO! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DG- Posted July 27, 2009 Report Share Posted July 27, 2009 No blending, or lighting. Flow is bad. too plain. colors don't mix. BG is too simple as it's just a c4d. How'd I do? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted July 27, 2009 Report Share Posted July 27, 2009 1/12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skyfi Posted July 27, 2009 Report Share Posted July 27, 2009 No Lighting, Render is still, Flow does not exist, Looks like Copy Paste, Colors don't go together. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted July 27, 2009 Report Share Posted July 27, 2009 1/12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
/성成현賢/.led Posted July 27, 2009 Report Share Posted July 27, 2009 Bad CompoNo BlendingNo LightingBad FlowLQ RenderLighting in BG is wrong Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted July 27, 2009 Report Share Posted July 27, 2009 1/12, you got a different one then the first two, kudos however I'm not suprised no one can get more then one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+Jono Posted July 27, 2009 Report Share Posted July 27, 2009 No light source, strange lighting on C4Ds (looks like it's coming from different spots), Colour pallet from the render does not match that of the C4D, C4D is whored everywhere, No Flow, Depth is meh because of the render, Render does not blend, Apart from C4Ds it's just a black background, render looks like it's just randomly copy-pasted in, render contrasts too much because it belongs in a light sig whereas this is a dark sig, XxShadiusxX needs to spend his/her time doing something more productive than testing the IQ of people obviously more intelligent than him/her. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted July 27, 2009 Report Share Posted July 27, 2009 Sir you do realize that if i posted one of my real tags it would be better then most of what the idiots here could produce right? Anyways 2/12 oh and learn your place before I actually slap you -_- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mister Sir Posted July 27, 2009 Report Share Posted July 27, 2009 Sir you do realize that if i posted one of my real tags it would be better then most of what the idiots here could produce right? Anyways 2/12 oh and learn your place before I actually slap you -_- E-slapping? lawl. Not a lot of depth. Yeah, I know I'm bad :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adama. Posted July 27, 2009 Report Share Posted July 27, 2009 Shadius, if I may, it seems that insulting people's knowledge and intelligence will not get you good results, and putting people "in their place" is certainly not your right. It doesn't matter if you are better at graphic design than everyone on this site, for as long as you continue to flash it in their faces they will not respect you as much. You have more experience than most people here, and possibly more talent, but expecting them to know things they simply do not know, and insulting them for not knowing it, is not productive. Certainly, this could be an interesting exercise in good cnc, and you could help many people here with your criticism, but instead you simply act like everyone here is inferior, and as long as you do that, the only inferior one will be you.~{Adama} Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted July 27, 2009 Report Share Posted July 27, 2009 0/12, one more person can go before i edit in stuff Edit: Adama you don't see the actual thing im trying to do here so i won't spoil the suprise... yet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+Jono Posted July 27, 2009 Report Share Posted July 27, 2009 Sir you do realize that if i posted one of my real tags it would be better then most of what the idiots here could produce right? Anyways 2/12 oh and learn your place before I actually slap you -_- I was joking, cry me a river. Intelligence isn't determined by the skill level of your tag making. What makes you better than me? You can make better tags, congratulations. I don't give a sh*t. I don't have to learn my place, I already know what it is. Learn to take a joke. OT:2/12 =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 27, 2009 Report Share Posted July 27, 2009 Just looks like a render on a c4d. Mistakes as pointed out above. In fact, there's nothing else to point out. How can there be 10 more things? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted July 27, 2009 Report Share Posted July 27, 2009 He's simply trying to test your knowledge of REAL art conventions. Rule of Thirds has been missed by a bit. There is no movement or rhythm. Heck, there's no balance, both symmetrically and asymmetrically. There's more, but I'd just be copying off a list. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sparta™ Posted July 28, 2009 Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 Sir you do realize that if i posted one of my real tags it would be better then most of what the idiots here could produce right? Anyways 2/12 oh and learn your place before I actually slap you -_- I was joking' date=' cry me a river. Intelligence isn't determined by the skill level of your tag making. What makes you better than me? You can make better tags, congratulations. I don't give a sh*t. I don't have to learn my place, I already know what it is. Learn to take a joke. OT:2/12 =D[/quote'] On topic: No light source, strange lighting on C4Ds (looks like it's coming from different spots), Colour pallet from the render does not match that of the C4D, C4D is whored everywhere, No Flow, Depth is meh because of the render, Render does not blend, Apart from C4Ds it's just a black background, render looks like it's just randomly copy-pasted in, render contrasts too much because it belongs in a light sig whereas this is a dark sig, XxShadiusxX needs to spend his/her time doing something more productive than testing the IQ of people obviously more intelligent than him/her. To sum it up, Bad CompoNo BlendingNo LightingBad FlowLQ RenderLighting in BG is wrong (and yes, I just did teh copy paste) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maliki Posted July 28, 2009 Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 It has negative ground and it has no effort in it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted July 28, 2009 Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 Not a good tag. The focal is LQ for starters. There are many lightnings, however, it seems that the render is left alone with it own lightning & not edited to achieve a lightning blend. Colours are terrible. The signature is so flat. The sig should be 3:1 plain, it is actually the opposite. Try to add some of your main ideas into it. I know it's just for cncing, though I'm just telling you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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