A little something I'm working on...

[AfterlifePaladin]

I'm making a Gadget/Ancient Gear Set, and I wanna give a sneak-a-peek. I know you hate Ancient Gear Gadjiltrion Dragon, but give this one a Chance. It's Much better.

 

 

Effect: "Gadjiltrion Tuner" + 1 or more Machine-Type non-Tuner monster(s) When this card is Synchro Summoned, Remove from 1 play "Gadget" monster from your Deck. This card gains ATK equal to the ATK of the removed monster. It also gains the appropiate effect based on the monster removed. *Green Gadget: When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, draw 1 card. *Red Gadget: When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, Discard 1 random card from your opponent's hand. *Yellow Gadget: When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, you gain 800 Life Points.

[Max Darkness]

You need to start a new line after the summoning conditions.

Otherwise minor OCG errors, which I believe I've fixed.

 

"Gadjiltrion Tuner" + 1 or more non-Tuner Machine-Type monster(s)

When this card is Synchro Summoned, remove from play 1 "Gadget" monster in your Deck. This card gains ATK equal to the original ATK of the removed from play monster. Depending on the removed from play monster, select and activate 1 of the following effects: -"Green Gadget": When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, draw 1 card. -"Red Gadget": When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, select 1 card in your opponent's hand. Your opponent discards the selected card. -"Yellow Gadget": When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, gain 800 Life Points.

 

Pretty good overall.

 

8.5/10

[AfterlifePaladin]

thanks

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The last one was a Ancient Gear Golem missing its piercing that could inflict effect damage. This one is a 3400 that allows free draws.